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double c 03-17-04 03:46 PM

some new shit
 
when i drop it try in stop it, im tight like a knot bitch
im ill like a disease makin your nob itch,
im the walkin dead targeting the feds,eat the brains out there heads,
now i got an immortal clan, undead army, try n disarm youll be gettin embalmed b.
heres the situation you facing, im real n your an imitation,
im losing my patience the occasion cummin,try runnin i stay gunnin,
clappin at your mens got your ends on a curfew
many stepped up,tryed, but never made it through
do i have to illustrate this shit with a picture,
samurai spirit hit ya to the face now you had a real taste,
im lion hearted,like moses the seas parted
an i aint even started.
your the one that put yourself in the place,impenetrable outa case,
thats cause you light n im a heavyweight, this your biggest mistake
ther aint no point in tyring to resuscitate the kid
i drowned him in my shit

Razer 03-19-04 04:57 AM

7/10 - Good VOCABULARY

double c 03-20-04 03:57 PM

needin more feedback

double c 03-21-04 03:38 PM

uppin.............

SPuLâ„¢ 03-21-04 03:47 PM

that's pretty good. I agree wit Razer, that was really good vocab usage. In a few parts, it was hard to feel the flo, but other than that, it was really good. Keep droppin'. :thumbup:

Also, could u check out my "my story" freestyle in Open Mic? thanks. :thumbup:

Gambino 03-22-04 04:47 AM

I thought it was pretty good keep elevating

one love.......


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