dagreatest V Razer
 

a mothafucka like u needs to quit talking shit/
i seen your stuff and you cant rhyme/
cos u aint got no rhymes to come back with/
quite frankly the only things you rip/
are the ones you get while you lickin dick/
i'ma bring the heat and u cant handle it/
take hip hops's most greatest quotes, go home and study it/
u stepping to a nigga that spits flames/
you a dumb piece of shit everything you spit's lame/
i'll put a contract on your head bigger then Lebron James/
but theres no need since you already getting sprayed/
a bulletproof vest aint gonna get you saved/
cos my verbal attacks attack the mind/
i'ma like a desease/
i'll leave you ass behind/
you'll be fucked up like a poltergeist/
my words are like magic and they'll neva end/
you better believe in the after-life/
cos taking me on you better be prepared to transcend/
cos your body your family will never find/

Damn....Never knew were that wack, but ill spit anyway, here goes:

Im arellic, you're pathetic, forget it, dont sweat,
Before you get defeated and need a paramedic,
You little bitch, you say my words dont rhyme?,
Well tell me people - does desease rhyme with behind?,
"Da"?, Dont you mean "the" you crap non-rhymer,
It seems that every time you spit, you sound like a first timer,
You cant spit, just get off this forum you fool,
Or pick up a dictionary, and go back to play school,
You're getting a shitload of haters, while im getting fans,
So sit back & relex, and start clapping your hands.

Aight, done this quickly so sorry if it aint that good but hey.
PE@CE

weak battle
no punchlines
bad spelling

Razer
flow- $
vocab-$$
STYLE-$

Da greatest
flow-$
vocab-$
Style-$

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Overall This Was An OK Battle.Weak In The Punches Category.Disses Were More Prominent In This Battle.Razer Takes This One For Better Vocab Usage And More Complexity.Dagreatest Came Too Weak.

Vote-Razer

da greatest lost this battle on himself. no structure or scheme really, just looked like u tryin 2 hard man half tha shit dont rhyme or make sense. razer had a decent flow and a few nice punches. razar was hittin harder and better vocan and wordplay. work on ur punches and flow 'dagreatest' and ull b aight down tha road. battle goes 2 RAZER takin ery catagory. keep it up fellas

winner:RAZER (flow,punches,vocab)

Razer got it though not a great battle...Flow and punches razer maybe structure for greatest

Razer=6/10
Greatest=4/10

weakkkkkkkkkk assssssssss battle you both need to quit rappin seriuos but razor got it just for not suckin as bad as the other kid man this was awful

weak battle yall
but im gonna this one to razor just for comin out with harder puches
not one of yall had a hott verse razor ive seen better from you

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