dirtboy69 vs. Godfather(2)
 

16 bar max verses due by saturday
no bull shit or dick riding votes
good luck

here's my verse:

your lyrics ain't hard more like a wet pussy//
not hurting shit just kinda soft and gushy//
and your punches hit like a paraplegic boxer//
i could get harsh split ya in two, why bother//
with godfather's verse lacking any substance//
pathetic rhymes godfather's got no cofidence//
he's striking out with everyone of the girls//
now in gay chat rooms looking for your thrills//
but you hide it all locked up in the closet//
with that verse your punches must be locked up in it//

k uppin for this guy to post you got till tomorrow

[Rape'N This Kid]
"Anal stabbing" is the only "punch technique" this little "bitch-has-mastered",
Mind block? Naw i'm leaving this kid "lost for words" like "script-less-actors!"/
I'm "bending your mind", stabbing your brain with my "pen" now I see "stress-at-this-point",
Ima rip "your shins off", use the "remainder of ya leg" and beat you to "death-with-a-JOINT!/
Leaving "dents in your skull", simply because im "hard", its my "fist-this-guy-met!",
I'm like a "surgeon with Parkinson's disease", coz this bitch getting "ripped-by-this-NET!!"/
Lets "play a game", but dawg ill go first and its called "defeat-the-newbie",
Ill battle you with "sandpaper on my hands" so I dont "beat-ya-SMOOTHLY!"/
I aint gay though, sorry to ruin your "plans", I just spilt "RED" blood all over your "blue-print",
I have a solution to your "played style"..You're constipated thats why you cant spit "NEW-Shit"/
[Rape'D This Kid]

where it say net it surpose to say Vet

hey real good verse lets get some votes now so uppin

uppin for votes

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yo....DirtBoy69 verse was very basic man...punches were ok but kinda thought there were a pit played.....your flow deffently there...and structure was ok...but you realy need to work on your punches....wordplay was okand vocab was very elemntry....6/10
Godfather..much beter verse.....your punches hit hard....vocab was nice...flow was wack tho work on dat....wordplay was good but ur vocab was got won you dis battle coz other cats was kinda week....7/10...good battle....
v/godfather2

uppin this for some more votes battles are taking for ever

uppin this come on now lets gets some vote in this thread

dirtboy: structure is okay, flow is little off, vocab is down and your punches were okay i give u a 6/10

godfather: structure is off, flow was off, but vocab was nice, and your punches hit a little harder ..i give u a 7/10

v/godfather

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116933

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i forgot this even happened upping lets finish this