LK63 VS Godfather(2)
 

ill drop 1st, now
10-20lines
no dickriding
5-0 ko

My punches drop like grenades,…..here Catch
U couldn’t put fire to paper, ...let alone a Match
This kid’s punches like a well run Dry
He’s skillz couldn’t be found, by da C.S.I.
This kid grabs a mic like a Gauge, and starts dropping Shit
He strikes wit empty Rage, like theirs no bullets in ya Clip
Ur verses, like drift in da Muzzle, I’m typing ya death,
like I’m filling the blanks on a Monkey Puzzle
These rhymes like “fresh air” they don’t stop Commin
Like “Every Breath I Take” got this weak mc Runnin
This kid dropping nursery rhymes, wit a grade 3 Mentality
Godfather, better expresses himself “Anally”
Kid u got no Potential, plus ya spittin out da wrong Hole
Well, ya rhymes r pure shit, it must be ya Asshole
Godfather’s, rhymes are full of shit, not even a retard could Believe
It’s filled wit he’s fantasies, he “literally” wrote this in his Sleep
This man’s rhymes don’t flow, like he stutters in Text
His rhymes so delusional, this man needs an Exorcist
My spit like Acid, now I got ya sleeping wit Maggots
I took ya Apart and then reassembled and renamed ya Inspecta Gadget

and now ur turn :thefinger

Looks like Im a "public enemy", well lets start bad behaviour..
..Stick my dick in ur mouth.. leave a chock - full - of "flava"..
U aint dope playa, sit down, shut up & watch me chin check ya..
..cuz u abuse Grammar.. more then kids with Dsylexia..*
Lost to timevirus, then had "IM TV's bitch" in ur siggy a way ago..
..so damn if yu got dropped by "TV", consider me the radio..
Ill give ur girl the love below, lickin off her make-up..
..Then drop LK faster, then Outkast break ups..
I sonnd u, go elevate cuz i feel bad i broke ur essense..
cuz..
..I sat this kid on Santa & he still couldnt demand presence..

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breakdown for lk63:

flow: it was alright pretty basic could of been alot stronger though 6/10

volcab:not bad pretty good array here not much to say 7/10

punches:,good personals and the amount of punches was strong too deffinatly hurt godfather my fav line was,"This kid dropping nursery rhymes, wit a grade 3 Mentality" i'd give you 8/10

overall:21/30 good battle verse coulda upped the mechanics but the punches really worked well

breakdown for godfather:

flow:for what you got it isn't bad basic but it works 6/10

volcab:a good variety keep it up in future battles 6/10

punches:you lose in just the amount of punches cause you had such a short verse but you hurt him with what you did have like, "..cuz u abuse Grammar.. more then kids with Dsylexia..*" overall 7/10

overall:19/30 good verse the big problem was it was so much shorter then your oppenent and in turn he threw more punches

vote--lk63 like i said he had more punches and better personals

ps. vote on my battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116620

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Uppin for votes 2 and if u vote i will return the favor

Godfather won this shit.........he kept it short and sweet. His closer, by far, killed anything that lk wrote. God's shit had better metaphors while lk's didn't even make sense..........lk , you ain't that bad, you just need a little work. Try using better wordplay...........

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ok can we pls get some votes on this battle

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^upping votes

V/. Godfather2

Clearly The other cat needs some elevation, I mean godfather didn't come all that hard but it was enough for the win!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118346

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helllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllo can we get some votes on this

Aight basically lk dropped this rhyme:

This kid grabs a mic like a Gauge, and starts dropping Shit
He strikes wit empty Rage, like theirs no bullets in ya Clip

Notice the metas, multis, shit like that in his verse... decent punches too.. godfather just had that one dyslexia punch but the rest of his verse was weak and it was short too. He had a good personal going, but then it was kinda weak at the end.

v/ lk.

return the favor, hit my battles.