My Anthem or whatever you wanna call it (freestyle)
 

I came up wit this shit in like 5 mins, so don't be hatin' that much. Just wanted to have a little fun. Here it is:

Yo, yo, yo, yo, I’m here now, and it ain’t a mistake/
You betta fear now, cuz I’m gon prove you fake/
My name be SpuL, and I come to write/
If you wanna fuck wit me, then it’s time we fight/
Come to write…write, write, write/
Fuck wit me…fight, fight, fight/
My rules be simple, stay the FUCK outta my way/
Get in my way, you betta RUN for the highway/
Yea, it’s true I love cherry coke/
You can make a joke, but you still broke/
I’ll be takin’ niggas to school, every single day/
They’ll be actin’ like fools, in every single way/
My rhymes so tight, they make you so sick/
Just like your mom, damn, she has a dick! (haha)/


Lemme kno wat y'all think. :thumbup:

I think it was alright but I think you could have been more creative

but you good though that one was just a little off

peice

not much of a topic and i wouldn't call it an anthem but it was alright keep up the work

check my verse out too http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116713

that sucked hahahaha na just playing it was ok for a keystyle or whatever but u really need a better topic to write on