The Sinnister Vs pictureperfect2
 

Aight lets do this
No crew votes
10 to many lines as you need
No cheatin

SPIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

u sure this is a battle thread doo? it didn't have an (x.) by the side of the thread?

yo to make sure this is a real battle i aint postin my verse till your checked in. so checkin and mines done.

Aight Im checked in

ite shits checked and spit

Im addicted to spitin u addicted to getting spittin on
I got a luegy so come along, like a barney sing along or cheech and chong folowin a bong
Start at a slow pace then race to a jog. Punches leave u hazed like California smog
Got a station of sodomy fornication this cat turns it on. Like the music in gay porns Bouces his feet to the beat and beats on I got on air force ones this prep claimin street wearin clogs. One worded alliterations I got tons.
Barely need two vowel sounds to get u to go down, so wave the white flag. Im above jus callin u a fag, this cats bi but only gets dirty pussy like Prince has a sign his a douche bag.
Like peasants u a lower class wear clothe in public don’t remove the tags, type of poor ass cats who reps then returns the jazz. Put the scrubs in scrubs yo rhymes bout as appealin as your mildewy tub. Cat think he ganna get some love. When battling me im leavin his record’s situation hairly like my rhymes be givin it dysentery. This battle aint no cake walk so no cherry on top, quite on the contrary like showin up to yo girls virgin vigiana and noticing aint no cherry to pop. Cuz I got there first and know that stop don’t mean stop. So u bearly even got to cop// a feel jigga get real u fuckin wit a pimp wit massive sex appeal. Never fuck animals but I know how to make a piggy squeal.
Dead man walkin heres your last meal.
My rhymes be your fa-vor-ite. Yours like tastin the flavor of shit. And havin to savor it.
My lines are long no need for shavin it. U remind me of cauches and potatoe chips, yo dumb ass only still battling cuz u too lazy to quit. Don’t mind that redundant spit

Don't say shit for i make you eat the same shit you sprayin
On this bitch ima get crazy like a sequal ta jason/
this aint make belive so try to make a smart statment
Blow your brains to fragments while ya ligaments are still pace-ing/
slowly slash ya face ta several pices
leave the remains in disclosed locations kept in safe places to serve
your ass at hannibals bankquet /
u talk-shit thats why you aint gonna have legs to walk wit/
Half-man half bitch this battle is dimished
Ya crawling like a cabbige patch kid
im spittin at the finish line after overlapping you twice at the speed of light/
With my stratigy inclided im placin you on the blind side of the lyrical line/
like a lost puppy in denial searchin for his owner he cannot find/
But the only purpose you deserve is to serve a mans behind/
only a puppet like you could earn such a rite/
No strings attached to get burned on the mic/
frightend by my words u certainly put up no fight
like a python my verse will bite you /
Simmaliar to a mic tyson ill strike n put your lights out/
You fuckin homo
ima make this picture perfect when i snap shots at this genome soilder /
Motherfucker was neva told he was fuckin wit a G-I Joe high-roller /
N u don't make more sence than a hobo with a rollex/
Less meaning than friends who hold hands/
pointless rambling is the key to ya flows/
yo, you seriously wrote that when you where sober/
Only god really must know/
fuck this battle is over im done lets round up some votes

Ok im going with TS on this one. Not only because his was better lyrically but PP2 your avatar was so fucking annoying I had to put my hand over to read your spit.

With my stratigy inclided im placin you on the blind side of the lyrical line/
like a lost puppy in denial searchin for his owner he cannot find/

I really liked that line, aswell as the rest of your stuff, nice flow good length etc.

pp2, although some of your shit was good it didnt "fit" together and flow well, also on some of your verses you left yourself WIDE open to attacks.

Good work on both side, pp2 keep practising and youll waste kats and TS you already are.

Keep it up guys.

Uppin For Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

crazy like a jason sequel? thats sick sinnister i got u

breakdown for the pictureperfect:

flow: you didn't break your bars up too well which hurt the overall flow of the whole peice and the bars were really long without any mutlis, that's just some of the problems with your flow not great 4/10

volcab:this was alright i guess but it doesn't really matter that you used a good set of words when there really wasn't a clear rhyme structure. 5/10

punches: nothing really here too, you had a couple of small disses like, "quite on the contrary like showin up to yo girls virgin vigiana and noticing aint no cherry to pop. Cuz I got there first" i guess you did good on the mutlis with lines like that though i'll give you 6/10

overall:15/30 just not much in the mechanics department you really gotta up this your punches were kinda based on played topics too.

breakdown for the sinnister:

flow: the bars didn't really match up too well, you had a clearer rhyme structure then your oppenent which helps you get some points but still you need to work here 6/10

punches: played lines really more volient like killing him then anything real clever i liked, "Blow your brains to fragments while ya ligaments are still pace-ing/" cause it showed off some multis. 6/10

volcab: desipte some good lines like the punch quoted above this wasn't amazing but solid 6/10

overall:18/30

vote--overall both of you didn't do much swinging it's like watching a boxing match in the last couple of rounds when both fighters are tired and just trying to stay and there feet not throwing punches. but anyway sinnister gets my vote

^^^^ p.s. vote on my battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116620

hey sinnister had some nice punches and the other guy both nice structure it was like a ti but i was fillin the sinnister so my vote goes to u

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SIN won cuz of his structure and overall flo...pp2 i cudn't understand ur flo cuz u didn't relaly divide it ur structure wuz horrible bro..
go vote dagreatest vs YoungStar

VOTE SIN