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Tha*Reign*Man 03-19-04 07:27 AM

Reign Man Vs Razer
 
U know tha rules, check in

Tha*Reign*Man 03-19-04 07:29 AM

ayt ima key my verse up after you check in so i know ya don't no show

Razer 03-19-04 07:50 AM

O.K, Ive Logged In And Now Its My Time To Drop Shit,
Top Flows That Come Bigger Than Your Top Lip,
You're Just Another Newbie Tryna Make It In This Game,
Tryna Be Different From The Rest By Putting Stars Between Your Name,
Why You Called Reign?, You Got A Reign Over No Flow,
Plus Your The First Person To Stick His Face Over A Photo,
You Best Get Your Book And Write This Note For Yourself,
That This Is Rapbattles.com And You Cant Vote For Youself,
And Now I Think Its Time To Wreck Your Reputation Right Now,
And Make You Worn Out, Like The Patch Above Your Eyebrows.

Aight, im done.

PE@CE

Tha*Reign*Man 03-19-04 08:03 AM

ayt nice drop

Razer? wuts sort whack ass of name is that have you got?
You can vote for yourself, thats how ya get wins have you forgot?
I checked out your battles in your sig, dawg ya in tha wrong damn place
Cause ya wouold'nt know wut a punchline was if it hit ya in tha face
Its Destructive right here merking ya right here, AKA The*Reign
Razer's so ILL, oh i fogot your in what crew again??
Your battle record is 0-1, ya lost to a newb, and battling herbs
Ya think your so cool, cause ya listen to a band named Disturbed
Your whack,and all your fake ass gangsta lines are played
And, yes it is true, i found your brother and sister in bed

Razer 03-19-04 08:23 AM

Aight thanx man. Nice drop 2. Aight now people, letz get some votes on this please.
Pe@ce

SINISTER 03-19-04 08:38 AM

YOU BOTH SUCK I GIVE U BOTH A VOTE OF MINUS 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a terrible battle

SINISTER 03-19-04 08:40 AM

Psyche jp yall..it was DeCent battle but ima go wit razor on this one i understood him more


v=Razor

DirtBoy69 03-19-04 10:35 AM

breakdown for razor:

flow: straight and to the point solid from start to finish nothing complex but it worked well 7/10

volcab:pretty basic here you could use some uppin in this spot but this wasn't bad 6/10

punches:nice personals not too many of them but what was there was good my fav, "Top Flows That Come Bigger Than Your Top Lip," 7/10

overall:20/30

breakdown for reign man:

flow: the bars matched up well and most of it flowed except the bars with again and herbs? how's that rhyme? you lose points for that 5/10

volcab: pretty good like your oppenent you did enough for a battle but nothing great 6/10

punches: you addressed your oppenent almost every bar and had a couple not bad lines my fav, "And, yes it is true, i found your brother and sister in bed" it was just harsh 7/10

overall: 18/30

vote--pretty good close battle both had some nice multis i'd give it to razor though

ps. vote on my battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116620 well i guess razor can't but

p-90 03-19-04 12:07 PM

this p-90 and ima pop til ya chest get lifted
in ya crib 4 tha stash better check ya biscuits man
wen tha tech get lifted
im most likely 2 wreck ya biscuit man
so think twice if u plannen 2 hate
hand-to-hand i can damage ya face
ima reckless dude
tha sawed off dump rounds turn his frame into breakfast food

lk63 03-19-04 07:10 PM

The Reign Man--i didnt like that much, thought u had him but got lost in ya flow
the end was good but somehow, u have to read urs 3times to get it to flow properly,
it was a tuff one but i give this to (Razer) better punches, and flow, nice

i would like to see (RAZER VS JUSS_BLAZE) think it would be fucking brilliant,
Razer come on consider it, then PM me, if u do decide to, i wanna see that

Vote: Razer

Razer 03-21-04 12:36 PM

Just upping............Come on people, lets get this battle over and done with please.

Pe@ce

L.I. 03-22-04 08:01 PM

hahahahaha reign u got merked def a newbie.....razer nice spit u had it flowin n punches hit way harder than reigns.....reign jus elevate n than go up gainst the better opponents......vote=razer......return the favor wit an honost vote
me vs daclassic
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117024

Daclassic 03-22-04 08:10 PM

razor: verses were nice i like this one...flow was there couple personal too and a little humor was there and structure was nice good job

reign: yours was nice too. jus that punches werent hittin and flow was a little off soryy

v/razor

please return the favor and vote an honest opinion my battle
daclassic vs L.I. its in the front page of front lines ....thankx


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