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double c 03-20-04 07:45 AM

for the mens that wana hate
 
disrespecting me.dickriders you know who you are.


Motherfuckers im ready for any thing you bring,
you can spray paint that metal i know it aint bling,
You might have a bigger crew but i still shit all over you,
i'll take your mens on one by one n one by one n one by one till im done just for fun,
if you was in my area we'ed do this shit for real, on the strret,
but you a pussyhole scared of the beef, prayin it stays on the beats,
you scared of competion i got a premintion,
when where bigger,got more mens in the click,
We'll do it crew for crew spit for spit
you pussyholes wont manage it, dont worry ill make sure its over quick.

thats a promise bitches

DirtBoy69 03-20-04 09:36 AM

flow was alright but you gotta up your volcab you used a pretty basic array of words just up it and it'll get better overall i'd give this here 6/10

double c 03-21-04 08:12 AM

uppin....

Gambino 03-22-04 06:03 AM

yah low vocab read a book

it was alright

double c 03-22-04 12:57 PM

talk about read a book, i asked for feedback not a fuckin dickhead to write shit.

HeXen 03-22-04 01:23 PM

yo...v week...vocab was bais and wordplay da same.....use mulit' to make it dope....good try tho for a newb...keep it up...4/10
pz out :D


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