Lyrical MC vs Dilettante
 

Aight den. Checkin in. Jus waitin fo ya to drop yo verse.

Dilettante is da latest herb to join da herable spitters,
Newb wackstar aint past puberty still looked after by baby sitters,
His text rec is below sea-level kickin' his rhyme like he shell shocked,
Hes been mocked by just checkin in and all his open mics fell and locked,
His week punch never could penertrate i just caught his firsts and snaped wriists,
As his rhyme taken bad twists and his blured vision of Hip hop mists,
Dilettante will neva cosolidate in RB coz his rhyme will neva polonate,
His wackness his blossemin' wid very word spat at a low rate,
Dis verble merkin' will leave "L" in his rec to add to his hart ache,
His rhyme mirors dumb fuck and fake coz look at mess his rhyme makes.

Blah Blah......did dis quick..

If ya think dat is lyical den music has lived in vain
Niggas rhymes mo dead than a teen dat Jason has slain
I'm gonna flip this nigga quicker than a porno magazine
You know, da one dat you left on yo mother's Tv screen
Niggas record is hidden, now you know dats plain wrong
He prolly got mo losses den Tupuc got unrealesed songs
Since you from England I'll wait & murda yo as at tea time
But you get one sugar to match yo one punch in dat rhyme
To sum thangs up..... dis niggas history is a mystery
And win for em is lookin like a haunted house...dark and misty
So I'll give you another chance and allow you an edit
I just hope its not half as bad as a crack head's credit

aight dere you go. My first spit lookin fo my first win

yo,not bad for a newb.....could be beter tho......come on peeps please vote lets not sleep on dis......

A thanks boi, yo's was aight, but I hope ya kno ur gonna fall. But a lil side convo; you in England cuz of military or something or you jus live dere?

yo this is my outtake,..

lyrical..you had an aiight flow nd as usual ya structure was there. You punches were ther but they just didnt hit hard enough but together wit ur personals they were all right..keep it up

dilettante..you had an ok flow but ur structure lacked. Your punches definetly didn't hit hard enough and neither did your personals..you might wanna check the rulkes before u drop ur verse next time...no feedin...but keep it up

v/lyrical

aiight cheers bro......uppin 2

i no this isnt the place to say this....but lets battle mc......pm me if your down....i'll vote on this battle in a lil....by the way mc you took this one.....

like i was syin lyrical got this one....but you could have came wit harder lyrics than that....your punches were a little weak..ive seen better from you...but you do need to work on your structure.....but you no wat you did and didnt do...i just like yours.....7/10

Dil: you was aight but i think that lyricalis just to good for you.....but it was a nice try...next time battle a newb and you will most definetly win.....just workon your punches and meta4s......all in all....6/10

vote=mc

uppin3 !!! :D leave links and i will hit ya back

uppin.......levae links i will hit u back wid a honest vote<dont usaly do dat but no1 votes on ere so i gota do sumfin out it...pz out

uppin...peeps vote..if you wont your battles voted on then you gota vote aswell....leave a link and i will drop a honest vote...pz

breakdown for lyrical mc:

flow:it was alright could of been tighten up with some multis but it worked fine 7/10

punches:you did alright at gettin to him with some personals and you addressed him and not too much was said about your self over all solid job done here my fav line,"Newb wackstar aint past puberty still looked after by baby sitters," 7/10

volcab: good job here no single sylable rhyming here solid through out the peice 7/10

overall:21/30 good verse you've got a nice collection of punches and know how to put a verse together

breakdown for dilletante:

flow:it was alright not great kinda basic but worked 6/10

punches:nice personals again just like lyricalmc you did a solid job at staying about your oppenent my fav line was,"He prolly got mo losses den Tupuc got unrealesed songs" you guys pretty much matched here you get 7/10

volcab:this is a weak spot for you, you used only what was needed to get the point across and nothing strong enough to earn points here up this in your next battle 5/10

overall:18/30

vote--lyrical mc edged this one out with a better rounded verse both went toe to toe with punches but in the end it was the better written battle the wins

p.s. vote on my battles there in need of poll votes to finish

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