Guyver4mk VS daclassic
 

Here we go, here's the rules:
*infinite lines.
*no dr votes.
*no hate votes.
*no crew votes.

Yo, speak mutha fucker I'ma start with a curse/
Fuck you up so bad that all yall niggas put together still couldn't imburse/
Enough cash to help save this mutha fucker on his way to the hearse/
You weaker than a diss that come from that wigga fred durst/
Beat 12 shades of shit outa ya an leave ya goooier than a pizza with a cheezy crust/
Boi trust my lust to spit at ya full thrust and get nothin back/
If all I get back from you is a half ass track rhyme thats more whak than frat crews/
Probably try ta hype up ya record when its got 15 or more interludes/
Forgive me for this, I ain't tryin to be rude, it's jus my style to be crude/
But when u leave the loo, you stink of shit and piss on the seat dude/
An still you run ya mouth like its gon be hard for me to defeat you/
If you gon act like a baby then thats how i'm gon treat you/
Speak on ya own level, ga ga goo goo/
Here, I'll open this door for you ta walk through/
Cos I'm 10 times you, 9x2 is me cos i grew/
so not to be on the same level as you/
Muller you like the yogurt, two scoops then i spew/
forgot you look an smell like shit, with a personality of a few/
Hundred misgruntled dwarfs with vertigo so don't want to grow/
Like your rhymes they ain't got nowhere to go, so they stay and gather dust down below/
Don't even try to speak to my spit and spill to my lyrical flow/
Cos in the end u'll probably die from aids after gettin some from a dirty ass ho/

damn i got to hurry up i got things to take care of....but i got a enough time to battle ....LETS GO


hey yo look i only got a few minutes to get rid of ya confidence
u didnt even give me a time limit to drop a rhyme with this
sshh im droppin this, crazy, ya rhyme vocab compared to babies
ya lazy rhymes dont feel like coming out ya f.ckin mouth for ladies
it doesnt really matter dude if u came with an attitude
im hot, ya best chances to battle in northern latitudes
i gave u the gratitude but f.ck it i got to laugh at u
how u goin to let someone spit before u, then beat crap of u
guyver ya rhymes sometimes visually impair eyes
one line ends to the left the next on the other side
i aint high , jus think that u need some special attention
on how to separate ya freestyle sh.t and whatever is written
forgettin' before u battle to stop by the local library
to do countless hours to study stretchin vocabulary
guyver a winless striver hopin he win this barely
you couldnt beat me even if you start keying since january
so next time come with ya best rhyme plus a check time
so u can have a chance, if u givin' me less time

to get in ya ass lol....peace
~dclassic~

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<a href="http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116933">guvyer4mk vs da classic</a>
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116933

close battle here's my vote:

breakdown for guyver4mk:

flow:at first glance i thought that maybe your flow had gotten away from you but then i read and saw you got a couple of basic multis in those long bars to help give strength to the flow overall not bad 7/10

volcab:solid threw the whole peice you didn't look to be trying too hard or not at all nothing really to say good job 7/10

punches:there was a good amount of them most of them seemed to hurt to a couple seemed a little to general but, overall good job my fav line, "You weaker than a diss that come from that wigga fred durst/" you lose abit for those lines with the math what was that 9X2 shit? don't see where that hurt but... 6/10


overall:20/30 alittle more in the punch department and you could of done alot better but solid verse

breakdown for daclassic:

flow:slick just great you filled the better of the bars with a nice amount of multis overall best part of your verse 8/10

volcab:not a bad use no single sylable rhyming here keep it up 8/10

punches:not bad most of them address your oppenent well my fav was,"sshh im droppin this, crazy, ya rhyme vocab compared to babies" really shit on his ability i give 8/10

overall:24/30 this is a great battle verse

vote--daclassic took it with flow and punches

daclassic took this battle for 3 reasons flow, punches, and structure. he riped that shit hard. this was a good battle, very evenly matched battle.

Breakdown...

Punches: DaClassic
Flow: DaClassic
Vocab: DaClassic
Opener: Niether
Closer: Niether
Enjoyment: DaClassic

Overall: DaClassic

DaClassic had this....guyver was a little screwed up in some places. He jumped off and on from battle verse to something you would hear in a song. DaClassic came pretty hard with punches, and flow was good too. Multis were few, but I don't count them cause they are not required in a verse.

Alright battle. DaClassic has potential, guyver...um...elevate...

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d classic takes this one not by much it was cloe his punches cam a lil harder

Daclassic: dl classic ur shit was off da chain. all vet material.

guyver: ur spit was koo just a lil juvinile, especially the part about the pizza crust.
my favorite part was about how youll treat him like a baby.

open: Guyver
close: da classic
personals: da classic
metas: da classic
punches: DA CLASSIC!
multis: da classic

VOTE GOES TO ........... Da Classic