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Razer 03-21-04 02:15 PM

Check This Verse (Very Sick)
 
O.K - I SEE THIS AS MORE OF A POEM SO READ THIS AS A POEM INSTEAD OF LYRICS.

Mc's My trade, Chuck Too Much Heat When A Tune Is Played,
Cant Pass My Barricade, Them Who Do Get Delayed And Decayed,
That Price You've Payed, You Can't Spit So I Hope You've Prayed,
Under Suveillance Like A Drug Raid, Fake Boys Get Sprayed,
And I Will Make Your Mum My Maid, Right Up Until Her Hair Has Grayed,
If Im Betrayed She'll Feel My Blade, Physical Powers Will Be Displayed,
If Theres A War Then Im Frontline, Quickly & Swiftly Spit Alkaline,
My Flow Dont Undermine, When Lyrics And Beats Are Combined,
Best Worship Me Like A Shrine, Or I Get Back Like Canine,
This Game Is Totally Mine, My Name Will End Up Headline,
Top Of The Climb With No Decline, Lyrics Are Linking Like Chains,
They Intertwine, You'll Find That From The Back They Bind,
Im The Best In All Of Mankind, Im First And You're All Behind,
If You Cant See Then You're Lyrically Blind, Lyrical Mastermind,
Try Play Lyrical Games Then You'll Be Outlined, Flows Aim For Your Spine,
Words Absorb Brains As It Penetrates, Collectively As We Conregate,
All Those Who Are Here Just Spectate, Too Scared To Hate,
Im So Cold I Make The Room Blitz, Leave Fake MC's In Fits,
Im Leaving Crews In Burial Pits, When Its Beef They Wanna Call Quits,
I Spit The Biggest Hits, Lyrics So Sharp That Your Throat Slits,
Theres Too Much At Stake, Too Many People To Meet & Money To Make,
Too Many Rappers Arent Real They're Fake, And Make A Mistake,
In This Pack, Im The Ace, Eat Out Your Brain Like Toxic Waste,
Im The Lyrical Gun That I Embrace, In Your Head 2 Bullets Get Laced,
Coat Any Mc In Any Place, Razer - Im A Well Known Mental Case,
I Randomise My Targets And I Fire With Different Angeling,
Pull Out The Place That Im Landing In, The Place That Ill Be Expanding In,
Please Run Away Coz My Lyrics Are Strangling, Is This Your Blood Im Standing In?,
Weak Rapper? - Then I Abandon Him, Girls Thats All That I Be Handling,
Its Rooms That Im Shaking, Give So Much, Then Im Taking,
Any More Lyrics Like This And Ill Be Record Breaking, Never Faking,
Switch On You And You'll Be Baking, Leave Your Chest Aching,
Call Your Friend, Save Your Skin, Before Blows Come To Your Chin,
Because You Cannot Win, And My Patience Is Running Thin,
Thats What You Get When I Talk And You Grin Like A Lyrical Sin,
You're The Joker, Im The King, Of This Physical Ring.

Let Me Know What You Think Yea? Pe@ce

Regulator™ 03-21-04 03:09 PM

Nice Shit Man. I Think You Should Stop Battling And Stsy Wit The Opem Mics.

double c 03-21-04 03:37 PM

na you stay battlin n your style can develope more, i liked this piece. hold it

Razer 03-21-04 03:43 PM

^^Safe

SPuL™ 03-21-04 03:44 PM

damn, that was some nice shit!!! You can do good in many different styles, which is sweet to have. Good job!!! :thumbup: Also, could u check out my "My story" open mic, I posted earlier today? thanks. :thumbup:

double c 03-21-04 03:45 PM

i battled earlier you should check it out, i got a few pieces on here as well

SPuL™ 03-21-04 03:49 PM

oh, yea. Could u also check out my battle wit Young Duke? we need some more votes on that. That would be cool. :cool:

Gambino 03-22-04 03:49 AM

I felt you dog that shit was fire!

Moto 03-23-04 06:15 PM

Heavy bro. That shits tight. props.

SpecialTechnique 03-24-04 03:28 PM

i think that shits phat and ur battlings heavy to i think you should keep to this. Peace

Evolve 03-24-04 03:38 PM

False advertisement.. This was not sick

Razer 03-27-04 08:27 AM

^^ Oh well, theres alwayz one....

DeVaZtAtE MinDz 03-27-04 02:27 PM

I thought that post was madd nice homie...just wanted to let you know. Them multis wer on POINT

$*K. HItch*$ 03-27-04 02:32 PM

that thing was tight man. keep it up.

Razer 03-27-04 03:33 PM

^^Thanx u 2.

Pe@ce


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