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IISlik147 03-21-04 02:30 PM

2nd Post On The Site, Hit Me Back With Some Feedback
 
I'm on point when i hit~the~scene//
Im so fresh like list~er~ine//
NI*gas call me mr~clean//
My clothes pressed and my kicks~are~clean//
Got the hoes impress//they flock all over my di.ck~like~pheens//
My watch and my chain~affect~em//
When the bright light hit the ice//you can see the rainbow~spectrum//
Get it straight homie//I dont need to fake~a~thug//
I play the role of that niggas that you hate~to~love//
I come~to~the~place//bumpin~the~bass//shakin the club//
Thats how i get~down///always with a thick~crowd//
sippin on some criss~style....//
we at the party so you know its gon' get~wild//
Flowing with a sick~style//
Rollin in a limo if we going more than six~miles//
What you nig.gas think of slik~now//
Im at the top level~as~a~rapper//
the devil~of~disaster//
The nations #1 eligible~bachleor//
I pop~my~collar//and cop~them~dollars//
even know in high school i was not~the~schollar//
you better tell your bit.ch not~to~holla//
she got an eye for the doe//she knows how to spot~a~baller//
cause I keep my drop dark~with~the~tint//
walk with~a~limp//talk~like~a~pimp//eating lobster~and~shrimp//
Most you nig.gas wallets~are~thin//
broke as hell//the onlt thing in your pockets~is~lints//
Robbing your local market~for~rent//
you outta your mind dawg so ima have to knock~in~some~sense//
your not the star player for real//
you act like one of the big dawgs//when really you watch from~the~bench//
no wonder why you hate~me~man//im a ladies~man//
I am whatever i say~i~am//
i learned from that slim shady~jam//
and if you thinkin you can stop me//you nig.gas must be krazy~man//
people worldwide shake~my~hand//
im 2 hot for tv and i didnt need to make~the~band//
im a giant//so when i walk i shake~the~land//
bringin noise like a sold out stadium of laker~fans///


let me know what you think of the piece......IISlik 1

Regulatorâ„¢ 03-21-04 03:07 PM

Whack Ass Peice. On The Real. 1st Make All Your Bars The Same Lengh. Then Wrk On Everything

Gambino 03-22-04 05:33 AM

I dont know it was hard to read

and there was no real topic


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