service vs. gambino
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

i'm checked in so I dont forget.........

one love......

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who goes first........................................

post when you post, If your waiting for me it may be a while, this is a tournament battle im going all out on verses

WuN

ight its whatever.......

one love...............

YO! I would love to merc this cat for ya'll but I got to many charges.....
Service i'll perform you a service and let my rhymes take out your garbage/(his rhymes)

yo this cats weak the only way he could win is if he had hater votes on the sneek....
here hold my dick service if you think i'm to hard for you to beat/ (he's beeting my dick)

yo! this cats got so many punches he's just to damn nice(joking).......
but the only way you'll have more punches is if you say my verse twice/

yo dog if you got any hot rhymes you better pull-it-quick......
cause most of it is like sewage pipes you both full-of-shit/

see I only like rap but I also carry the heavy metal....
so whos the real rebel hes got few gats but i got sevral/

look I ripped'em he's done, this cat cant handle how I spit-it......
cause I ripped off his tounge and licked my balls wit-it/


yah holla niggaz!

one love........

Wow... I thought you were nice

Sick of your hype, and your thinking your dope cause your from jersey
From the ghost town physical and elemental tactics couldnt burn me
Id been astonished if you actually got a vote, your herbish pittyless hopes
a cry bitch rapper who sits and waits for me to post
I spit thoughts lightly but I write with a modest pen
Get tupac out of your avatar your an embarassment to him
From post to post your starting to really starting to think your the best herb
and if your so dope why do you have a losing record?
Putting em on a stretcher, and ripping his lines into basic standards
when Im driving him nuts like nascar sponsored by planters
Attempting to be a net thug, but its obvious your fakin
wanna be an American Idol but your gayer than clay aiken
I need a mod! somebody please get an admin to ban this faggot
He's the only person on the board with less wins than the orlando magic
Dont htink you know what youve got, worse than a plummeting stock
battling me gambino your gambling your life I think you should stop

i guess i'll be the first to vote:

breakdown for service:

flow:solid flow it worked well kinda basic though 6/10

volcab: was straight nothing amzing but solid through out the first 7/10

punches:you didn't have too many lines in there, what you did have was alright except htat orlando magic line. shit like that's kinda played my fav was, "and if your so dope why do you have a losing record?" still kinda played but 6/10

overall:19/30 well rounded verse good a mechanics alittle low on punches but overall solid

breakdown for gambino:

flow:the flow really wasn't there the bars were all over the place no real mutlis to help out either 5/10

volcab:solid use of this i guess nothing special but hey? 6/10

punches:great punches i think this is where your flow got hurt it seemed like you were punching in every bar but some nice lines though like,"but the only way you'll have more punches is if you say my verse twice/" and,"yo dog if you got any hot rhymes you better pull-it-quick......cause most of it is like sewage pipes you both full-of-shit/" you diffently won on punches 9/10

overall:20/30 great on punches but you need to up your flow

vote--gambino gets my vote. he just ran home with it when it came to the punches

ok...dis is my opion....
SeRvIcE ...punches came week and i felt some were a bit played...3/10......flow was ok....5/10.....structure....syabols didnt match...3/10....wordplay and vocab...6/10....personals not many and were week...3/10....overall 5/10...a bit week but nice try for a newb...
Gambino ...came a bit harded with punches....5/10...didnt flow coz the lines were way to long....3/10....structure was ok but agen slabols didnt match in very line...4/10....wordplay and vocab...i felt dis is were the battle was desicded...8/10.....personals....some good....7/10
v/Gambino coz he came a hit harder with his punches and his vocab was a lot beta...pz:D

dam this was a very close battle gambino and service had good flow and line structure 6/10X2. Punches went to gambino he had some good ones and bad ones 5/10. this is were service had troule, his punches were weak but he had alot of them 4/10. and the enjoyment of this goes to both 5/10.
vote~gambino

Aight Check Dis..

Service: 4/10
Nice Flow, Punches Were Ok, But Multis and Metaphors Need Worked On. Your Structure Was Aight, But You Need To Come Harder....

Gambino: 6/10
Your Came Just A Little Harder Den Service...But You Still Need Work On Punches, Mulits, and Shit. Your Best Line Was...

yo this cats weak the only way he could win is if he had hater votes on the sneek....
here hold my dick service if you think i'm to hard for you to beat

Vote-Gambino

~R~

this was a good one!!!
gambino had a cupple of good lines like
yo! this cats got so many punches he's just to damn nice(joking).......
but the only way you'll have more punches is if you say my verse twice/
Most of gambino flow was plain and predictable. I give you a 5/10

Service had a well rounded flow and stronger punch lines,kinda died out towards the end tho.I like the line with;
Putting em on a stretcher, and ripping his lines into basic standards
when Im driving him nuts like nascar sponsored by planters
Attempting to be a net thug, but its obvious your fakin
wanna be an American Idol but your gayer than clay aiken.
my vote goes to Service for stronger punches. I give you a 6/10

I respect ya'll votes.......


one love........

iight...
service was slackin at the beginnin and picked up at the end wit the dissin, but you need an all around solid verse to go against punches every line...you had consistent flow and good structure...more metas towards the end and some multis

gambino...was pretty solid all around but i feel ya flow was off from bar to bar...had the personals and punches and metas at use in this...which definitely gave you an advantage in this battle...multis were pretty scarce too

like im sayin .... battles are about personals and disses, flow is definitely a key part also but im feelin GAMBINos cuz he came harder wit the actual diss part of the battle...

MADD PROPS TO BOTH EMCEES

my vote::GAMBINO