Daclassic vs. L.I.
 

AIGHT
RULES
10-20 lines
no d/r hate crew votes
no feedin
both will drop at the same time
due 20 minutes after check in :cussing:

check check checkin in.....droppin in 20 holla wun

aight i checked in....good luck

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Here we are its the newest member of L.I.'s victims....
My shits contagious, itll be leavin u sick son....
Sayin he da classic like he a reebok shoe....
Gettin bought jus like his lines,he thought we neva knew....
Shit he writes is all played like he on a swingset....
Im jus lettin him go cuz like sadaam he'll neva be a threat....
The first battle he got into was his biggest mistake....
Afta this verse his whole body has aches....
Thats just what i do when i flow gainst weak ones....
Spittin comes naturally cuz within 5 minutes im done....
Nail by nail im boardin up his coffin....
Detail by detail anger rises within....
But skill aint a sin and this is why i win....
First lines i had u pinned i just took your for a spin....
Coulda written 8 lines and wouldve been given the victory....
But u aint worth my time, to me your history
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Da Classic verse
 

okay here we go its anotha one


i'll cut ya head off when im rappin,......rippin ya from the neck up
think before u battle, instructions on how to set up
you said u hungry for wins...nukka i'll get u fed up
until u tired of readin on every line that i spit up
checkin on every second you postin anotha session
anotha lesson im presson to get it through ya mellon
sellon ya self to be victomized by verbal weapons
steppin on top of questions u askin on how to check in
L.I listen... i got a secret to get ya rhymes off
before the time's gone on fellas that make their raps long

nah i aint tellin ya shyt sssh! peace im out holmes

ok lets get sum votes uppin #1............................

aight im uppin(1) too

Daclassic these are battles and u didnt have any punches, u aint gettin my vote. u could be good wit the flow and multie's but put that shit to a structure. also it looked like u was feedin on there, and that was in the rules that u couldn't.
L.I. came pretty weak but didn't need to come strong against a newbie, not to many punches, but u had a few good lines of word play like
"Coulda written 8 lines and wouldve been given the victory....
But u aint worth my time, to me your history"
best verse and was your closer, alright there. sumin u need to work on is takin more then 5 mins for a spit even if u goin agianst a newbie, show what level u on at all times, and dont talk about yourself as much in the battle like in the opener and
"But skill aint a sin and this is why i win....
First lines i had u pinned i just took your for a spin...."
alright but need more punches
vote. - L.I.

yo dis battle was fuckin shti both of da verses sucked but i think classic took it by a lil bit cuz of his flow

My vote goes to LI, he had punches and classic didn't. Bottom line.

fair votes no shytty votes...something aint right
 

if i knew it was all about punches....then i would of gave yall a lot of punches
uppin

aight uppin #2...........keep the votes comin..........drop a link n ill return the favor....simple as dat hollaaaa

L.I Had Better Punches But Most Of It Didnt Make Sense Especially How Not Much Of Yah Verse Even Rhymed...Still Threw Some Irite Punches....

Daclassic Came A Bit Harder....Actually Had Flow And Wayy Better Structure...Not Really That Much For Meta's Or Wordplay For Either Verse....

VOTE:Daclassic

da classic: once again ur shit was koo. the only thing ya need to work on is structure.
structure elevates your rhymes a lot

L I: umm ur rhymes were played and tired. work on makin your bars rhyme. for example:
Here we are its the newest member of L.I.'s victims....
My shits contagious, itll be leavin u sick son....
so just elevate your rhyming

so heres how i see it........

open: da classic
close: da classic
personals: da classic
metas: da classic
punches: da classic
multis: da classic

VOte goes to .......... Da classic

U Forgot To Officially Vot So That Can Make Three
 

UPPIN(3)

Irite Dawg I Hit Up Tha Poll...My Bad I Missed It...Holla-Bakk.

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