Afterword vs. Puertoricanelly
 

15 min and countin

Ill make you love me like X's and O's/
im tha king and ill fuck yur bitch just to let you know/

how can you win a battle win you rock Abercrombie and fitch and american Eagle/
trying to beat me nigga is illegal/

Ill rip up ur body and expose your skeleton/
blend up ur remains wit ma rimes and sell you as gellatin (Jello)/

and no i dont mean bill cosby, cuz ur rimes sound worse then dat niggaz voice/
its a blessin youve survived through half dis battle, you should be in a state of rejoice/

Afterword go ahead & give me all the excuses how ur bitten rimes are really written by U/
Fuck 15 min ill give you a whole extra week to post and yur shit still wont go thru!!/

Cuz ur own computer knows when stupid shit is being posted/
you could be da blackest brotha in the world & ill still leave ya roasted/

im done spittin just waitin for u Afta..... G/L

well hot damn it looks like u stuck in a jam, like jelly
u must be a lunatic thinkin u can compare-wit-me, u wanna be nelly

wen i challenged u i knew u were defeated already, u get no respect
u must have gotten threatend wit a tec, and fled east from da west

well that a -test, that destiny manifests, itself
you were soft so u left, now da west will be responsilble for snatchin yo last breath

its break time here at work so ima bout to smoke dat kali kill
u came thinkin in hollywood u would get a deal, but now u glad we let u live

that shit iz short but i gotta smash out
hopefully we get some votes, even if not in my favor

afterword disperse divert blirts to quench ya thirst

u sorry asss helll man LOL Easy win for PRnelly UPPIN VOTESS! 1

Puertoricanelly BreakDown

ll make you love me like X's and O's/
im tha king and ill fuck yur bitch just to let you know/
Okay Flow. No Punchline. Worst Bar In History

how can you win a battle win you rock Abercrombie and fitch and american Eagle/
trying to beat me nigga is illegal/
You Fuckin Suck

rip up ur body and expose your skeleton/
blend up ur remains wit ma rimes and sell you as gellatin (Jello)/
Okay I Guess

and no i dont mean bill cosby, cuz ur rimes sound worse then dat niggaz voice/
its a blessin youve survived through half dis battle, you should be in a state of rejoice/
Please, Please Get A PunchLine!!!!!

IM STOPPIN THERE... WORST BATTLE EVER...IM NOT HATING ON YA'LL SHIT BUT LEARN PUNCHLINES... READ SOME OF MY SHIT..4 REAL.. STUDY IT... I VOTE Afterword ...BETTER PUNCHES, AND FLOW..OVER

Vote:Puert he came stronger in his verse he had better punchlines and better vocabulary

philly just "regulated" on his punches
now this harmless venom says he had better punches lol

this battle is pretty weak i must say myself, its a quikie

however i dont agree that only puches win battles
beacuse my flow spuratic, I will punch, slam, and cut ya

Very True But U Need Some Punches In A Battle. Thats Wat Makes It A Battle...

man yall are sum dumb mark ass niggaz how u gona compare me wit someone who uses East and west like 4 tiems in the same 2 bars. thats some bull Sh*t.

a puertoricanelly look at ur pm's and hit me up with an response

i like them both, their style is...out therr but i think if Afterword had a lil mo time, hen he might of actually took this

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man i really dont no, yall need sum practice, but ima give this one to my man nelly, nuthin personal, just need sum work

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

yo just drop a vote
we know this shit is lame, and quik
if u wanna dispute da skillz den holla at me in front lines
uppin
peace