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explicitot 03-23-04 11:58 AM

topical battle: explicit vs lyircal mc
 
this is it kid spit when ya ready the topic is "explosive rhymes"
just a practice battle
voterz just do yo thing
checkin in :shoot:

explicitot 03-23-04 12:03 PM

when i spit, i rain thunderous shit//
put catz in a plunderous trip//
i put u under my whip, cuz i ran u over, causin ya skin coroded//
my rhymes explode like a city block loaded wit explosives//
my lyrical scriptures go boom when im comin at ya//
i dont know why u chose rap as a profession u just an actor//

damn i gotta bounce so go wit dat iight

HeXen 03-23-04 12:31 PM

-----------------------------------checkin in----------------------

HeXen 03-23-04 12:49 PM

Wen I OnSlaute Verble It Comes Like Rain My EXPLOSIVE RYHME,
Not Reached Prime Dopness Wid My Hip Hop DEVOTED TIME,
Put Nigga To rest Wid My Rhymes Hooked wid dope like TNT,
My Rhymes Eplodes on Herbs,Like C5 i Kill EXPLOSIVLY,
But Lyricaly I Bomb MC's Down Wid My Punches to PENADTRATE,
Im Da Illset Wid My Explosive Rhyme So High It LEVERTATES,
Explode My Rhyme Like A Pin Discareded From the GRANADE,
Lyrics To Blow Up Niggas To let them Lick Wounds And BANDAID,
As My Rhyme Explodes Into In To Rec Mode I Penatrate NIGGAS,
My Diss leave MC's In tears And Choked Of Air In High FIGURES,
Explode To Reality Rhyme Spitin' From the Hart And To The TIME,
Front Line Dopness As I pull out My verble "Explosive RHYME"!!


Blah Blah.....Did It Quick..Yo Leave Honest Votes Peeps And I Will Hit Ur Battles Wid A HONEST Vote IF You Leave A Link...aaaiiggghhttttt!!!!

explicitot 03-23-04 02:11 PM

uppin on dis shit
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Kingz 03-23-04 02:19 PM

my vote goes to lyrical mc
the other one was good but too short
hit this battle pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116732

explicitot 03-23-04 02:34 PM

uppin
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HeXen 03-23-04 03:26 PM

yo peeps if u poll vote honestly and leave a link i will hit ur batles wid a honest vote.....wen i come online......

explicitot 03-23-04 03:27 PM

uppin

HeXen 03-24-04 07:52 AM

uppin 4 vote peeps leave link and i will hit back wid a honest vote..pz :D

HeXen 03-24-04 11:01 AM

uppin

HeXen 03-24-04 03:41 PM

uppin

Afterword 03-25-04 02:36 AM

this is common
to me the best mc doesnt always shyne in a battle
explicit got this one barely
I know it was topical but lyrical emcee made the topic too repetitive
i know u got flow, but try showin more with less tellin
u had him, but the more i read the more it slipped into explicits hands

Afterword 03-25-04 02:37 AM

almost 4 got
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117057

Gambino 03-25-04 05:05 AM

yo I thought lyrical mc one cause his was longer so it was better

because of the topic and thats about it

vote=lyrical

one love.......

vote on my battles please.......


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