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R1FF RAFF 03-24-04 09:56 AM

Dear Dad
 
eres A Piece Straight From The Heart.... I Know U Gonna Like It... If U Dont...u Shoudnt Be Calling Yourself A Rapper Coz U Obviously Cant Reckonise Skill.... ,,.....aight Ere It Goes..................
Ok My Mother Was Dumb To Have Me So Young, But Your The Scum Who Shot His Cum Then Done A Fucking Run/. U Left My Mum Hung Drawn And Quarterd. Gave Birth To A Son Whom Grew Up More Like A Daughter/ Because U Werent Around A Spent Most Ma Early Days. With Ma Sis Clowning Around Acting Girlie Ways/ When Most Boys My Age Played Armie. Id Be Cuddling Barnie Or Playing Fucking Barbie/ At Primary School I Hardly Had Any Homies. And The Freinds A Had Played With Ma Little Pony/ If Only U Stayed I Mighten Of Been So Lonley. U Could Of Taught Me How To Make Freinds With Male Cronnies/ I Cant Beleive Id Sit By The Phone Hopeing Youd Phone Me. How The Fuck Could U Jus Throw Me Away After Youve Known Me/ God U Mus Be One Phoney Excuse Of A Man. & What I Cant Understand Is Why My Mam Even Got With U Damm/ Id Love To Throw A Right Hand And Knock U From Where U Stand. Into Cukoo Land, When We Meet Im Gonna Demand/ U Expand Beyond Your Normal Self Centered Thoughts. Notice I Aint Mentiond Your Name Thats Coz U Enter The Courts/..... chourus[/u
Dear Dad That A Never Had. It Makes Me Sad To Think How Bad. I Wanna Stab.[u] Both Your Eyes Out/
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R1FF RAFF 03-24-04 10:04 AM

Yo Peeps Im Sorry It Ends Abrubtly. Jus I Aint Had Time To Finish It Off...... But Any Comments On The First Verse And Any Helpful Advice On The Much Needed Second Would Be Gratefully Appreiciated... R1ff Raff

Gambino 03-25-04 04:28 AM

I thought it was hot so you should post the rest of it dog........



one love........

R1FF RAFF 03-25-04 12:10 PM

Yeah, Nice 1. I"ll Finish It Asap. Its Jus When Uve Made A Verse That Good Its Hard To Make The Second Of The Same Calibre But Im Working On It


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