afterword vs poeticaltendenceez
 

rules have been stated
cum out swinging

i'll post tomorrow...you took so long to respond damnit.....go ahead and post if you got something, i won't bite...word...peace

yur lame
how long do u need?
4get poetic, u got negro tendencies( colored people time)
and that shouldnt offend no 1 cuz im a brotha

ayo, check

negro tendencies, fuck yeah I'm a goddamn nigger ~ the only thing black bout you is your tongue ~ asshole licker//
a hustla with inteligence, 20 years old and fucking "living"* ~ the only fun that interests you is molesting lil children**//
I gave you a chance to spit your mother fucking rhyme ~ you musta been too scared or just waiting to bite some shit off mine//
you could emboss me with your lyrics, but I still wouldn't be "impressed" ~ i drop this shit out my ass, penetrating your cracka khaki vest//
fuck you now, and fuck you afterwards ~ i'm wiping you like my ass after shitting a big WHITE turd

Check-it,

Yo emcee P.T.( poetic-tendenceez) yur definately
not the thug poet you pretend to be//
Yur just another undercover brotha,
with homosexual tendenceez //

You are simply tempting me,
to shred you into smithereens//
Because you are using scapegoats like poetry
to explain your sensitivity and insecurities//

He said, “lets battle, but how about tomorrow”
I figure that’s how long it took him to borrow//
Some punches, similies, and wordplay,
Just to get his ass beat on Thursday like it was his birthday//

And I don’t wear jerseys,
I just need a white tee//
For some trees, my boy at da swap-meat, will swap me
A air-brushed shirt that reads….R.I.P. emcee P.T.//

Now type the hottest shit u got, and it’ll look like bluurrr
B/c u speak insignificantly “Afterword”

yo u finally showed up, good business
i quik keyed once i seen u finally posted, but let the best "word" win!

voters holla!

you're the fucker who took so godamn long to respond to the first post bitch....quit your pussy crying.......peace

uppin this for some votes.....honest feedback will get return honest votes on your stuff....peace

poetic take this one cuz of his first line it makes me laugh tight shit dawg other dude uyou did alright

uppin (2).....go ahead and finish this shit....this nigga got dropped hard...damn

yo thats a lame ass reason 4 that last vote
but phuck-it keep it movin
uppin

uppin (3)..........post a link and i'll hit it up with honest feedback....come on ya'll

up this shit...bitches.......come on ya'll...some honest feedback and this kid'll be done....damn.....post a link and I'll hit it up with honest feedback

afterword ur bars were too short ur punches were too simple ur personal about how long he took was rubbish and u really didnt insult him enough also try to work on ur vocab a nd make ur bars longer

poetic ur verse was well structured and ure punches were witty and hit hard ur flow wasnt great though and u didnt use personals
vote-poet

return the favour with an honest vote
vs KINGS
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127

vs rec-d
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940

vs touch to gold
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127

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vs KINGS
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127

vs rec-d
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940

vs touch to gold
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127