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TheSinnister Vs VitaL
10 lines... No D/R No Recycling No Hate/Crew Votes First to 5 Votes 3-0 K|O |
CHeCC....
PoSTiN NeXT PeRioD... DoNT No SHoW... haha... ReMeMBeR... iTS Due ToNiGHT |
“Im Untouchable, but im makin you feel me”
:nono:
HaHa… YeaH… BeT… -CLeaRS THRoaT- I’m whack – no, its not my fault ur names a type-o/ 2 N’s instead of one thinking then ya lines might flow/ -CouGHS- Oh sorry… u think im really startin a verse off like that? HaHa… CheCC iT… You should be callin yaself a “delinquent”/ Everyone kno the “deal”, but no one kno where the “ink went”/ Ya times been spent on weak rhymes to vent/ Your emotions are bent worse than a bipolar Vietnam vet!/ Come hit me bacc, I don’t care if u “amped”/ A thousand volts aint shit when its attatched to ur pants!/ You couldn’t see me if we was freestylin in Stockholme/ I’ll decapitate u whit razor punches till u really come “off the dome”/ You claimin u untouchable, well my flow’s industrial/ While you’re developing yours in the lab, I’m already professional/ BlaH… FuCC iT… HoLLaH aTCHa Boi! |
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why u no show for? fucc it ... i dont care ... post a verse... 10 lines... get it done... Pz. |
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Aight i will as soon as i come back from cali aight ill be back on monday
Later playa |
No warning shot bitch!!
The end of all law 4 shots fired another body falls
I execute the guilty violently //Undercover killing spree //no warning shot Die motherfucker, die, die // I'll put a bullet between your fucking eyes Pull the trigger - cock the hammer back //5th shot to the back of your neck You're not a threat, you're a fucking disease //Eradicate the enemy Dead body - another crime scene //Blood-stained pavement, chalk outline Bullet holes you're dead and cold //The end of all law - no warning shot Die motherfucker, die, die You won't survive, when the bullets start to fly //Protect and serve yourself /ya Dug your own grave, now rot //In that hole decay The murder will never stop -neva a warning shot |
A'ight battle...Vital...pretty nice verse...you had some shit in there that was good, and some shit that wasn't great...structure was off...flow's a'ight...nice shit all around. Sinnister...well...I dunno how you got accepted into Class sic...cause that shit was pretty wack. I think you could do better, and you lacking punches and flow in this battle, were your downfall. Don't hold back dawg. Some of these herbs can surprise you.
Vital: 7/10 Sinnister: 4/10 No hate...plz hit this up...thx... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362 |
Uppin For Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
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TheSinnister, wasnt feelin it, It seems like that would be good if you were doing a collaberation with gangsta nip or something but I battle, no.
VitaL good verse, I especially liked this bar, "Ya times been spent on weak rhymes to vent/ Your emotions are bent worse than a bipolar Vietnam vet!/" but I didnt get this line, maybe Im missing it, "Come hit me bacc, I don’t care if u “amped”/ A thousand volts aint shit when its attatched to ur pants!/" But anyhow, Vote goes to Vital. |
This one was close. Not either MC's best performance -- i hope.
Vital punches....4/10 rhyme structure and abilty...3/10 overall rhythm...4/10 12/30...ouch..lol Sinnister punches...3/10 rhyme structure and ability...6/10 overall rhythm...4/10 13/30...not much better..but enough for my vote I'm gonna give this one to Sinnister. Stay up young MC's. UBR |
weak battle, you guys need to work on personals hard-core, but for flow i got vital, more even lines and easier to read. Opener, vital ruined his with his little cough cough thing, so mine goes to sin. closer i give a tie, not cause they were both good, but both whack, no personals, punches goes to vital, and multies, vital had one i think, and i dont think that sin had any, both need to seriously elevate.
v/vital |
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appreciate the comments... n critique...
i didnt come my best ... no... not at all.. lol uppin for final votes... |
yo yeah i give this one to vital im bewildered at how sinnister is a flyweight yet no disrespect but you gotta elevate at least a little i give my vote to vital
vote=vital |
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