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universatile 03-26-04 02:12 AM

open mike 2
 
just recieved a few replies to my first open,
now a new one church is in and MC God has spoken,
to me prayin a whole congregation,
so many inseminations- my ejaculation could start a nation,
these text raps are like how I induce orgasms,
guess Im just braggin-creatin spasms up and down vaginal chasms,
so Ill be up in heaven awatin your confession,
dont know with whom your messin-I got your girly undressin,
kinetic are my prohetic sick spits that lick tits,
from navels to a-holes -clits and arm pits,
rhyme after rhyme the days of my life,
soap opera captures house wives like the man in tights,
may say my rhymes are limited- too sexual, :hump:
a one track mind gets down like that when textual,
but I profess I am the best,
you test and detest,
I digress to battle pests and success is my quest. :gfy:

Willa 03-26-04 02:35 AM

much better than the first
great flow
excellent vocab
excellent multis
that was flawless
id give it a 9.5 out of 10
id like to see u battle
do u do audio????????

Gambino 03-26-04 05:19 AM

thought it was hot....
great flow....
great multeis....
great rhyme sceme....
overall great job.......


one love......

universatile 03-26-04 11:57 PM

Thanks for the replies. I would like to battle but am sporadically on the net, I never know when I can get on it because I dont have a computer at home. I have been in two street battles and the first was lost but not by a huge margin. The second I didnt even get a reply my opponent choked after he herd my skills. He was not ea real rapper just professing to be.
I want to battle on a chat room but the cybercafe where I get on computers wont let me download chat.


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