Red Dogg420 vs Prezident
 

5 min no longer, u no tha demo, give it ur all

Wheres my secret "SERVICE"on this one
 

Aight everybody Prez is in the building

Iv studied all ya battles closely with a watchful eye\
Me goin against you is like cars goin against left eye\
Ya ryhmes are subpar and vocab fall off the charts\
my mouth is like my glock my brain the clip and its cocked\
when i open my mouth i spit a nine elleven\
ya ryhmes are like the twin towers collapsed with reprocutions\
there is do fuckin descusion hold AK-47's like a mu fuckin russion\
my metaphores rerout ya nervous so when my words kill theres no pain\
my lines remoe pierces of ya brain and then make you insane\
ill reroute ya bladder and kidneys runnin poison straight through ya viens\
and leavin ya capilaries squized of all the bloo that remains\
ima finish this one as strong as i see fit, ya ryhmes ar limp and mine are hard, im the viagra to yo dick\

man i am too high haha

my flow is so sick, ud think i had tha flu, and i no that u fagets wish u had it to, ur game is weak u cant even step to this, ima steal this battle like i stole ya favorite neckless, forget this, wack mutha fucka, i put yo ass in tha grave yard right next to ya brotha, i reagrange ya face like sergen, im spittin so hard ud think its a burden, i rip u in 20 places leave u stuck like a bych, u aint even kewl nigga, u aint nuthin but a trick, so step off my nutz stop suckin my dick, it told u ur rymes sound like shyt

Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

yo alright my vote goes to prezident because his struster is better......
and his puches were better and his multeiswere better.....

reddog you need to start wrighting your rhymes better so there easier to read....

i'm not hating just being honest

one love......

ah'ight here's the breakdown

Flow: Redd dogg
Structure: Prez
Vocab: Redd dogg
Punches: Prez
Personals: Redd dogg

It was close but I say redd dogg was just a little better, holla back
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117955

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fuck all yall sorry ass emcees
 

fuck all yall except my real niggas

bitches dont even vote and when they do its not based on skill its to get the favor returned

this is my last verse on this site
REMEMBER THIS YALL

i came in seeking fame, seeking the game but i wondered into a group of lames puttin the rap game to shame\
these bitches get misty eyed and vote for the one they like best, claimin no test, come battle me without a vest, fuck all the rest\
i aint got time for a popularity contest cause i came here to battle, im lookin to squash beef like droppin a bomb on some cattle\
all yall are corrupt, venom course through ya veins, but i will sustain my name cause my words will forever remain\

prezident got this shit with better vocab flow strucutre punchs and personals redd you need t oelvate an work on your structure wordplay and rhyme scheme that verse was assed out elevate kid

damn prezident merked dogg dude. when i open my mouth i spit a nine elleven\
ya ryhmes are like the twin towers collapsed with reprocutions\
damn dats a sweet line. flow was awesome,opener wasnt das best but still good,and your ending was average.

dogg.you have to work quite a bit on yours but you had some ok lines such as:
i put yo ass in tha grave yard right next to ya brotha,
ecxept i dont know if prezident has a dead brother. anyways my vote goes to prezident

Prezident you won obviously. your verse was better. nice punchez and multiples. step it up next time. you can always be better.

vote=Prezident

who cares if you're not coming back Prez
you suck
although you DID win this battle
for better punches
more creativity
although I didnt like the left eye line
but the main thing I have to say was
your structure
your structure got you the win in this
I hated every single aspect of Red Dogg's verse
lol, no hate though
v/prez

Presidentz structure, punches got you in this battle yo. Case closed.
v/ structure