Help With Rhymes!!!
 

my rhymes seem to be pretty good, their just seems to be something wrong with them, when i say read off the lines they sound wierd, but when i say the words im rhyming they sound ok, heres a link, any suggestions

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117399

Because your punches are not good & your rhyme`s are lame Boo`s what the fuck is that Flow & Vote cmon you can do better look at one of my verses.