Tryin for respect
 

man im from the same place as the nigga kanye west so u wanna come at me better bring the best but trust me by the end of the nite ima put yo ass to rest but ga ahead come with bring the test yall wanna battle bring the shit but yall some bitches would even puff on a blunt if someone told u to hit it yall not even good thats rite not even a lil bit so i say to whoever want to fuck with me come with the A game and ull see ull prolly walk away from the battle and say damn man thats the kindve mc that i wanna be so whoever wanna battle come at wit it but im tellin u kno dont bring that weak ass pussy shit

Platinum Thug

~1~

thing was pretty good.

YO you need to wright your rhymes like a rap......

not in a paragraph..........


one love..........

I cant read it....dont paragraph...**Feels retinas burning**

Yo, dun I ain't tryin to shit or nothing. But yo, WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT!!!! Seriously son work on your your rymes son that was boring as hell to read. But, once no offence intended......lmao

work on vocab
structure
and good luck gettin respect with a name likr that lol