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Triple_N 03-27-04 11:08 PM

Just some shit I layed out
 
*Yo, on the real a nigga's just trying to improve his skills, so let me know how really feel about my shit, Holla at cha boy!*

Unrehearsed, emurshed in rymes/ that at any given time can depurse & morph into flows/ who knows how far this will go/ maybe its my time to blow/ Cause I'm unique, never bleak/ ryhme strong never weak/ I'm a tell you like rakim did " don't sweat the technique"/ All I need is a track to match my intensity/ purpensity for flowin' like water/ anyone sound like me kinda sorta/ but you can't place one cause I'm unplaceable/ when I get my shine I'll be unreplaceable/ my flows are contagious/ they can't be contained they flow off these pages/ I'm the new sensation cause crowd's elation/ its conceivible that I'll touch the whole nation/ I'm hotter than hot don't spit fire but UV-rays/ born sicker than sick gettin' better wit' each passin' day/ So if you hate on me you just hatin' yourself/ cause when no one's lookin' you blastin' me in stealh/ Listen up and listen closely/ cause those be ryhmes that go for nothin' less than top dollar/ thats why I can afford to pop my collar/ everybody knows I spit my shit proper/ If you got problems/ I'm a solve'em/ you can take my music and use it/ its considered theraputic/ if it was food it'd be delicious/ and at the same time nutristous/FDA approved untouchable's a understatement/ I walk the path of the righteous careful of the wet pavement//

Red Dogg420 03-27-04 11:39 PM

a bro nice work, u had a few good punch lines, u have improved from ur last battles, keep that shyt up :thumbup:

Gambino 03-28-04 12:28 AM

Thought you had some good punches.......

good shit......

one love......

Willa 03-28-04 03:13 AM

good vocab and multis work on the flow though it stuck in a couple of places
keep droppin


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