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~ Sinnister ~ 03-28-04 10:21 PM

Stand Up Lyrics
 
I've been so bored going nowhere /Pissed off with life
Don't want no girls to hold me/ I only love my knife
When it's night im on my own
Out on the streets anywhere i may rome/
just hope i'm not all mad/
Know that nobody loves this soilder/
but this Don't make me sad/
who's Gonna stand up To the one's who bring me down
I've got murder on my mind
I can feel it now
And my hatred grows
More and more in every way/
Every day i conceal all this painful hate/
Destroy the rage that gets bigger as i hit the stage/
Slay the mules who gimme fuel for my gauge/
Top speed pace as i blast away/
Take away all sins that forsake my own sake/
Stake your heart n eat away everything i gave you to this day/

Comments/Suggestions

Gambino 03-29-04 06:32 AM

thought it was good..........


one love........

lilkdogg1988 03-29-04 10:00 AM

That was ok. I'm not dissin on you or anything but i wasn't really feelin it right now. It's hot enough to make it on an album but i wouldn't suggest it on like your first hit or whatever, but other than that it was real good. Holla at ya boy!

||Optimus|| 03-29-04 12:26 PM

Shit wasn't that good at all....no hate...but really most parts didn't go and flow togethor...vocab was elementary and some of it didn't even rhyme....so fix all the above place some multis in there and you would elevate..onez


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