young duke vs. Diaster Master
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

check mic

Ya'll know who I be. It's ya boy Duke ready to take this boy like i did him last time.

Aight nigga i killed you once, I even seen drive away in the hearse,
but you comin back like you ready to get raped by a verse,
I'm Yung the Great and you's disaster the bitch,
I dismantled ya ass and at the same time joined ya clique,
Nigga dont let the record fool you, this kid is not a rookie,
I've mastered the art of war and you've mastered bein a pussy,
when you seen who you was battlin, you knew you loss right from the start,
I could spit two lines that'll go through ya heart and rip you apart,
I'll tratyou like the old days, Drop you with the rope all around ya throat,
And if ya neck dont break then I'll sit there and watch you choke,
and bets beleive Duke wont hesitate to shoot at you,
they only disaster in here is how i'ma sweep this battle,

you couldn't sweep this battle if u were a jonitor
go back to american idol cuz all you want is glamor
my spit is hardcore, it leaves bloody decores, and starts world wars
homies call u lucky dick cuz u always get ur hand
keep u trained like a dog working at my command
you say you rip people apart, well i'll disintagrate them into sand
like little jhon Q u'll have a change of hart, battleing me was not that smart
you say you shoot people? we'll i get pysical, i'll hang you on my church steple
I will do it on a sunday, the prist laughing at a crow all-you-can-eat-buffet
and like how richard simons feels the burn, ur moto all-day-beat-ur-meat
like a hore just slob on my nob
and if we have another in the next verse
i am gona do my job
and lay you in that hearse

Nigga you I forget where but i heard that John Q line somewhere

Yung duke got this easy
Nigga dont let the record fool you, this kid is not a rookie,
I've mastered the art of war and you've mastered bein a pussy


his verse was okay, but it was enough to win

disaster your verse didnt flow well at all and had a horrible bar structure which made it even more complicated

breakdown for young duke:

flow: solid flow even bar length and nothing un balanced about the sylables godo job 7/10

volcab: alright nothing special though 6/10

punches:really nothing here, some vague open ended swings but nothing that i can see with damage to it 4/10

overall:17/30 good on the mechanics of the verse but you need punches

breakdown for diaster master:

flow:horrible you didn't ahve bars match up no mutlis really used this wasn't great at all 5/10

volcab:basic average that about sums it up 6/10

punches:alot of them here nothing that hurt too much but you threw more then duke did my fav was,"you couldn't sweep this battle if u were a jonitor" overall 7/10

overall:18/30

vote--close battle but it was the punches that edged diaster master for the win in this one

iight...two problems i got ehre...i agree man...that john q line has definitely been said somewhere else...i have heard the exact line, but i dont know where...and ... are we supposed to be feedin off other peoples verses?

young duke...good flow (for most parts) good punches and personal...im definitely feel that...ive mastered the art of war line...pretty solid verse...some lines were iight but others were good

disaster...you had a decent flow (once again for most parts) punches were out dated seemed like ive heard a bunch of these lines before...

gotta give it to young cuz he came correct and had better flow and harder punches...

Yo I'll be the first to admit I didnt like my verse. it was probably the worst i ever did

like little jhon Q u'll have a change of hart,< Line is from a ludacris track

yea thats where i heard it

2-1 young duke wins