(my bitch)poetictendenceez vs Gambino(The Don)
 

you alredy know the rules.........


16 lines at the most.....
no crew votes.......
no hater votes......
no dick riding votes......
versus do by midnight tonight......


lets go bitch......

alright whore...here it is.....

I got BETTER-TEXT to SEVER-NECKS; leave a MESS-OF-RED/
BEST-IN-JEST, even if I jot my 'notes high' like TREBLE-CLEFS/
NEVER-REST, I'm CHOSEN-SIMPLY to ROAST-THIS-EMCEE/
And my 'talk shows skills' like murdering OPRAH-WINFREY (talk shows kills)/
GO-AND-TEMPT-ME, I HATE-FAKERS with GREAT-ANGER/
So I'll put 'metal to your chest' like a fuckin PACEMAKER/
I carry EIGHT-LAZERS, ROASTIN-FOLKS, you KNOW-YOU'RE-TOAST/
Have your body parts 'stuck all over the board' like POST-IT-NOTES!/
Everyone VOTING-KNOWS Gambino ain't a THREAT-TO-ME/
I'm the BEST-EMCEE, and 'you ain't fuckin with it' like VASECTOMIES!/
REST-AS-EASE, coz my VERSE-IS-SCARING this PERSON-DARING/
Fight me? Kid I'm the 'best in the ring' like a PERFECT-MARRIAGE! (think)/
This CURSING-BARON, will grab your body, TURN-AND-TEAR-IT/
Coz your rhymes ain't makin sense like having VIRGIN-PARENTS/
My talent? No WORDS-CAN-BARE-IT, coz POETIC'S-ONE-DOPE-EMCEE/
And Gambino's like Phone Sex... kid, you'll 'NEVER-CUM-CLOSE-TO-ME' (lol)/

whats up bitch!

how you gonna try and FIGHT GAM when you already know you loosin TONIGHT FAM//
cause you couldn' beat me if I was peewee herman and you was my RIGHT HAND//

so stop the COMMOTION this bitch should just stop fuckin' POSTIN'//
he's been beat so many times he should start to carry around LOTION//

and this cats overrated because in real life he has no NET WORTH//
but on the other hand I got more variety than the home shopping NETWORK//

this nigga likes to start shit out loud so we know he's not DISCREET THEN//
so we started BEEF'N and he put a 12 hour time limit cause he knows i'll MISTREAT HIM//

so for now on i aint gotta chase after these bitches like CATTLE//
cause he's a pussy so there's already enough bitch in this BATTLE//

and yeah he is a pussy! and he sucks so he's always SITTIN' on his KNEES//
but like jessica simpson the question is, is it fish or is it CHICKEN of the SEA//

and now I just killed this cat cause this bitch wanted to start a FIGHT with ME//
so its like the sequel cause i just made another addition to the dead poets SOCIETY//

fuck you poetic.......

one love to all the other cats on this site..........

i'm out lets git some votes.......

uppin^^^for votes................

one love..........

uppin^^^for votes............

one love............

up this shit for the murder it is..no fuckn contest...bow down

man fuck you nigga^^^

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YO Check da break

Structre-Gam
Flow-Gam
Punches-Poetic
Multis-Poetic
Metas Poetic

Vote Poetic liked your vrese a bit more yo hit up my battle

how he got better punches^^^^^^



one love.......

I carry EIGHT-LAZERS, ROASTIN-FOLKS, you KNOW-YOU'RE-TOAST/
Have your body parts 'stuck all over the board' like POST-IT-NOTES!/
My fav line hot punch right there

Breakdown:

Punches: Poetic
Metas: Poetic
Multies: Poetic
Wordplay: Poetic
Flow: Tie
Disses: Tie

By Far Poetic Takes This One With Ease.He Had A Strong Opening And Ending.His Punches Were Strong And He Showed Some Tight Complexity.Gambino Was Well Out-Matched In This One

Vote-Poetic

this is some gay shit..................................

you bowing down yet? what's gay about it, you're merked...i'm too lyrically advanced for your ass

man fuck that your just an ass no lyrically nothin

i need some real ass votes not a bunch of dick ridin'