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Verbatim 03-29-04 06:46 PM

Pure Emotion
 
Emotion Triggered by Just Simple Thoughts
Hard to overcome when lost in Distraught
Motionless movement keepin it tamed
Lookin into past thinkin i'm ashamed
What have i done, what am i becoming
My mind is lost, can't overwhelm the numming
Hazardous times, Wondering why i'm living
why can't i stop fighting, and start forgiving
Got nowhere to run, and no one to turn too
All of my Emotions, are just to hard to Construe
tried to hide it, but that was just to hard to pursue
So i had to let it out, took it out even on my friends too
now i feel alone, lost without having any sense of respect
wantin to apologize to them, but i know nothin will correct
all the things that i've done, causing all this pointless commotion
and look at me now, sitting here releasing all this pure Emotion

Verbatim 04-07-04 06:52 PM

don't be sleepin

White Light 04-07-04 06:55 PM

yo that was a really good poem... yea keep that shit comming it was good... nice flow and every thing...

Verbatim 04-08-04 02:57 AM

thanks for the feed
uppin for more

spitah 04-09-04 10:24 AM

Nice, it had a smooth flow to it!

Verbatim 04-09-04 03:49 PM

what's up with this site and one line reply's. Wonder why people don't post alot.

SpitFyre 05-07-04 03:40 PM

it was a good pome and ity kind a made me fael like me when i was i a lil kid

LadyLyrical 05-08-04 03:59 PM

This Was Nice....liked The Emotion ...nyce Thoughts Put Together Straight All Together


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