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yo i'll take you opinons and wipe my ass with um//
you all fucking with a wigga that rule his own kingdom//
i tell you i failed spelling and grammer//
i think you should just dissappear line mc hammer//
i told you i'm just tring to hit ten so i can judge//
and really i don't care what you say i'm to lazy to hold a grude//

yo i got no proplem with opinons :thumbup: keep tellin me what you think

good ur structure is better alot better, but keep at it

i liked it alot more........


one love........