how did i lose this
 

im not complaining, i just wanna know how i lost and what i can do to improve, cause god knows when people vote they just say *** won.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362

you punches are awful and your flow is... ?!!?"? rubbish.
your throwin non connecting words and you vocab and spelling is bad . . have a look at the tutorial forum sorry i cant help you at that level get better than i can . .