DisasterPeice420 Vs. Lil Rip
 

Place The Rules Playa'

And You Spit First!!!!!!!!!

Ill Check In After You Check In!!!!!!!!!

at least 10 lines 20 max
no dickriding crew votes or hate votes
recycle if you want
you drop first
cool with you?

Lol Playa I Specifically Said You Drop First!!' But If You Want To Get It Twisted Yeah Im Cool With That No Disrespect I'll Drop First If Thats What You Want!!

And Nah' Fuck Recycling.. I Mean You Can Recycle If You Would Like!!' .. Its Cool

Im Checkinnnnnnnn In!!!!! ...

Droppin***

I'm The Fuckin General And I'm Pullin My "Rank",/
Lil Rip is a "Little Fish" Get Your A$$ Back in The "Tank",/
Ferocious Like A Rotty, Leave You Crawlin On All 'Fours',/
Another Body On The Shotty, Leave You Sprawled On The Floor,/
Red Dot On Your Back Like A "Dorsal-Fin",/
BuckShot Bend Your A$$ Like A "Convex-Lens",/
When These Disses Hit You Lil Rip, I Bet You Wish For Death,/
And Wish You Was Superman When That SKS Hits Your Chest,/
But Its A Cruel World So Poke Your Lip Out And "Pout",/
Cause You're "Just A Wannabe" And There Aint No "Doubt",/
I Tower Over You Lil Rip With Your Nursery Rappers and Rhymers,/
Even Over "The Net", I Will Tell You Over The Wires,/
You Aint Shit, Your FreeStyle Career is Dead Lil Rip Man "Retire",/
You Desire And Aspire To Be Higher, But No Tools as "Required",/
Fuck I Rap Whack, But That Shit Dont "Even-Matter",/
Wake Up Muther-Fucker Your Rap Dreams Im "Going-To-Shatter",/

Drop Playa................... I Aint Got All Day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

rip

that shit was a real DISASTER* pull out my PIECE to blast ya* tha master, at this rap game*live your life a disaster with no name*and get brian from all the girls you kiss*get piss and have your ass dismiss*and this is only tha beginning* and just like rims my revolver is still spining*disaster piece, let change your nam to bullshit right fast* cause that all you spit, is bullshit, like shit out fat basted ass*you can olny defeat me by other haters*cause you couldn't do a punchline if you had a hole puncher and notebook paper*cause i the fucking best so fuck you* run bitch run, while my missle hollow heat seek you*

lame but it should work

Lmfao Well Lets Watch Your Shit Work.......... It Was A Bit Hard For Me To Follow But.. Still!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Upppppppppppppppin 4 Votes............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppppppppppppin 4 Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Appriciate It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppin 4 Votes!!! Ya''ll THanks!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin for votes

still............................................. ....uppin..........................for votes

Flow-dp
Structure- Dp Was Easier 2 Read
Vocab-dp
It Was Easy 2 Say Who Won
Lil Rip - Advise 4 Lil Rip Read Some Good Battles
And Learn How To Elevate

Thanx Playa Appriciate The Honest Vote!!!

Good Lookin Out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Upppppppppppin 4 Votes

Uppppppppppppin 4 Votes

yo good battle
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over all dp yo shit was easyer to read and funny
lil you got some good rymes but use the same word over and over again use bars makin it so that its easyer to read your stuff good battle