wat do u all think, hit me back
 

yo im spittin this shit to get critiqued,
wonderin if you like wat my mind speaks,
spurrin a leak to the shit that makes me creep,
so deep my third eye streaks to my head and makes me leap,
can u gravitate or are your lyrics just fake,
my shit needs no second take, only need one chance and i got u raked,
this shit gettin real now,
my weapon aint conceiled now
its out in my hand lettin you know if u dont duck you about to get peeled POW!, hopefully some one feels the shit that i appeal
my words are revieled, all other mcs been kiiiiilled.

haha just a little verse
with no beat, let me know wat u think