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bRi SkEe 42o 04-01-04 11:52 AM

yo corny shti right hea but u kno u gotta pull out dat shit sumtimez...
 
yo thsi is some corny shit but my girls b sweatin it....i dont wanna hear bout if its lines up right or wateva wateva just tell me if tis good nigga iight! good looks

[chorus]
when you feel like poppin a shot up in ya head/
when you feel like you would be betta off dead/when you trippin cuz some chicken gave ya man head/
im here dogg, im here dogg/
when you think that theres nothin good left in ya life/
wen u think that ya only option is a knife/
when you think that nothin is ever goin right/
im here dogg, im here dogg

[verse 1]

most people say that life is what u make it/
u kno that shit is tru, and only u can break it/
shit goes down and you just cant take it/
but look wat u could miss do u really wanna stake it?/
i seen so many lives gone 2 waste/
seen so much shit that i didnt wanna face/
life hands u lemons but u dont want a taste/
u just wish that ya whole entire life would be erased/
but hold on tight everybody goes thru it/
most people who attempt say that theyre glad they didnt do it/
and wateva u need u kno ill get right to it/
the grass is greener on the other side so just cool it/
live every day like its ya very last/
be who u wanna be dont let yaself be masked/
just do watchu wanna do and live life in the fast/
lane..and make the best of it/
its YOUR life dogg so dont think nottin of it/
livin wit drugs, sex, violence, friends who do u wrong/
people u thought that u could trust all along/
so when youre feelin down just remember this song/
cuz im here dogg, im here dogg..

[chorus]
when you feel like poppin a shot up in ya head/
when you feel like you would be betta off dead/when you trippin cuz some chicken gave ya man head/
im here dogg, im here dogg/
when you think that theres nothin good left in ya life/
wen u think that ya only option is a knife/
when you think that nothin is ever goin right/
im here dogg, im here dogg

[verse 2]
yea u kno im here fightin any battle witchu/
stayin by ya side u kno im down 2 ride witchu/
always gotta deal wit shit people do to u/
cuz them bitches in life aint always tru 2 u/
life is full of broken promises heartaches and lies/
but dont be surprised cuz niggas are bound 2 make u cry/
somebody talkin shit boutchu just pass on by/
cuz if they see u frownin then they kno they took ya pride/
just keep on smilin and dont let the pain show/
cuz most people is stronger, than they really kno/
if u l;et the old shti crush you then there aint no room to grow/
messed up shit is bound 2 happen so just let it all go/
hold ya head high, and always stand tall/
and ko ya girls are gonna b there the moment that u fall/
ya gonna get thru it even if u gotta crawl/
and ill be right next 2 u on my hands and knees and all/
people constantly change, and shit always goes wrong/
but time dont stop ya life will carry on/
so when ya feelin low just remember this song/
cuz im here dogg, im here dogg...

[chorus]
when you feel like poppin a shot up in ya head/
when you feel like you would be betta off dead/when you trippin cuz some chicken gave ya man head/
im here dogg, im here dogg/
when you think that theres nothin good left in ya life/
wen u think that ya only option is a knife/
when you think that nothin is ever goin right/
im here dogg, im here dogg...


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Triple_N 04-01-04 12:18 PM

That was a nice song with a nice message. I like how your song painted a picture of the message it was trying to drop. Your ryhme scheme was kinda basic, I would have liked to see some multis. But a good song overall, keep it up.

bRi SkEe 42o 04-01-04 01:46 PM

iightcho good looks!

Gambino 04-01-04 02:34 PM

i loved it yo shit was hot...........


one love.........

bRi SkEe 42o 04-01-04 03:18 PM

yea son!! bri skee gettin madd love up in hea!!!! thank you all!! lol

bRi SkEe 42o 04-03-04 08:14 PM

somebody else peep this shit


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