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Status 04-01-04 04:54 PM

d.j em sce vs. lyrical havok....must see
 
look you no the rules..

no hate
no crew
no bitin
no d/r
blind spit
no prewritin shit
15 min.10-20 lines...


may the best man win

Status 04-01-04 04:55 PM

alrite nigga we got 15 mins. to drop from check in.............checkin in....

be write bak

Raphael 04-01-04 04:55 PM

aight im checkin in................................

Status 04-01-04 05:13 PM

Look Im bout to snatch this kids virginity…….

im bout to take it ez cuz u didn’t no I held the records like Guinness//
beat me?
u got shit bent like ur legs wen ur on ur nees beggin 4 forgiveness//

Tru you is a lightweight, cuz you don’t amount to nuthing//
When im done u betta believe in me, cuz in god u should b trusting//

Look im a god on rb so you betta show me some respect//
Throwin me in nikes is da only way u can get me in check//

Lyrical havoc, could never live up to his name//
He only battlin herbs so he’ll neva elevate in this game//

You’re a fake mc, who got monotonous flows to be specific//
I got this shit down to a science, define the laws of physics//

Murderin this kid wit my metaphorical lyrics//
I’ll admit it, u kilt alot of herbs now its ur time to join there spirits//

U like a midget scared of stilts the way u afraid to raise the stakes//
My rymes are off the rictor scale,shaken up da world like earthquakes//

Its like you piantin pictures wit ur eraser da way you drawin blankes//
YOU BEAT ME. April fools…… that was only a prank//

Makin a user on rb is da only way he could make a name 4 himself//
My adroit dexterous skills will have you strugllin for health//

I make nuffin but class sics

Status 04-01-04 05:14 PM

your turn hoe.......spit sumthin........................

Raphael 04-01-04 05:17 PM

I’m comin hard, wit knives to split ur eyes so you can “foursee” my victory//
And if these kids couldn’t get that wordplay, Irony don’t mean shit to me//
Dog, my words are known to be blunt-tight-n-blatent//
Beatin me? You aint gotta chance in hell like rollin dice-wit-satan//
My punchlines alter niggaz neurology//
I’ll have you prayin n pondering theology//
No folks not mythology//
Chronologic did infact offer me a tear jerkin apology//
I’m like Jesus rappin when I walk on water//
Spitten flames compared to hell coz its not much hotter//
With a sick verse of slick words, serving you like God’s my father//
I’m the Truth, if you were a preist I’d have you pop ya “colla”//
Your scared---you need to get-out-and-fight//
I’m showin no signs of stopping, like brakes-witout-da-lights//
If a nigga talking bout me, don’t let me catch wind//
Coz ima make sure ur neck n knees become best friends//
My rhymes spillin more than old faithful//
U aint got shit to say, bitch now ur mouth is stapled//
My rhymes are dropping like bombs n’ leave you hidin under the table//
Come to ur house and rob while ur home…ill say im fixin the cable//

SNP 04-01-04 06:07 PM

your abc rhymes suck ass.. you dont gotta rhyme every fucking line

Raphael 04-01-04 06:17 PM

you a noob so you shouldnt vote when you dont know what to say when you vote

G Deuce 04-01-04 06:38 PM

D.J. EM SCE -
flow-7/10
word usage - 8/10
punchlines - 9/10
creativity - 8/10
Overall - 33
You came wit some tight punchlines and wordplay.

Lyrical Havok
flow - 6/10
word usage - 7/10
punchlines - 7/10
creativity - 8/10
Overall - 28
Your flow was too simple and that was your downfall.
vote D.J. EM SCE

White Light 04-01-04 06:43 PM

aight well good vocab from d.j. but i thought lyrical havok had better flow adn structure.... good personals and punchlines from both but next time a bit more would be good...
my vote goes 2 lyrical havok
I VOTE 4 U... U VOTE 4 ME

Sac King 04-01-04 07:53 PM

shit siic siiic i like da punch lines and hard grammar..haha man i think dj em sce lost dis one sorry 2 say so my votes goes to lyrical havok

MikeG 04-01-04 08:24 PM

here goes the rundown
vocab= dj
flow= Lyrical
punches= dj
style= tie good shit and battle all around
it was kinda a tie cuz you guys both have good personals
Opener= Lyrical
Close= dj
My vote goes to dj em sce because i like more of his punchlines but it was a hard decision

Hazard Lyrics 04-01-04 08:35 PM

wow......thats the best battle ive seen since ive joined....you guys make some of the people here at RB look hella stupid haha um my vote huh lemme think

Hazard Lyrics 04-01-04 08:37 PM

ok i just got my 10th post so ill vote on this tite shit....

d.j emsce i wasnt really feelin some of ur verses all though you had some tight punches in there...it just didnt really cut it for mee( even though this was the best match yet) but im talking against lyrical

(7/10)

Lyrical: wow that was some tite shit you spit....um...your vocab is coo, flows were hot, well overall i think you got this one

(8-10)


Vote = Lyrical havok

EyeDEA 04-02-04 02:20 AM

thats nice hazard lyrics weird u juss got on the site and made ur self stress for ten post to vote and why would you vote on this one its not on the first page kinda strange


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