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Leisure 04-01-04 05:35 PM

can i make it
 
while cleaning asses
and getting ready for new advances
i notice that this shit is a dream
ain't nobody want you richer
pulling no real cream
i been on the scene
for days and nights and weekends
trying to get that 10 thousand
i got bills and things to get
i want a movado watch, but can't get it off my check
sweat pours all the way from my soul
the souls on my kicks are so old
i got scotch tape, transulcent tape and electrical
all in one
taping up my shoes now, hopefully never a pair of my son's
I have no kids
and if i was a kid would i want me
broke and hard working for a lousy fee
the streets are constantly calling me
wanted the oldest profession to come out me
tricking and sucking them down
old men, young men, even an occassionally clown
passing the plate semi circled around
laughing and chuggling, snorting a pound
this is just the things that turns them on
having control of my life like a pawn

PROOF 04-01-04 05:38 PM

make it where, in rap? you got a better chance becoming the president of england (england doesnt have a president)

Gambino 04-01-04 07:14 PM

hahaha^^^

MADD HAtter81 04-01-04 07:40 PM

nono he'll have betta chance go to cuba legally go to the poetry thing here

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-01-04 07:41 PM

Cut The Boy Some Slack' ... Lol...

DAMN!

Restricted 04-01-04 09:11 PM

Yea Fasho...Ya'll Who Commented Ain't Ever Going To Get A Fucking Record Deal....

Pimpin You Can Get Anywhere You Want As Long As Your Set Your Goal Where You Want and You Keep At It. Stop At Nothing and Strive For What You Want.

Just Elevate Man...We All Started Sumwhere....

~R~

Crossword 04-03-04 11:35 AM

^ word. Keep at it. We all couldn't rap at one point of our lives( not saying you can't, just saying it wasn't too good ) So if you practice and battle often and shit you will get better with time.

Vango 04-03-04 11:51 AM

yeah that cat talking shit to you is 1-11, whats he talking about.

Gunit101 04-23-04 12:37 PM

hey that sucked just kidding it was ok

Native 04-23-04 12:38 PM

It wasnt good


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