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keepITreal 04-02-04 11:20 AM

church of haters
 
welcome 2 the church of haters
wear gators, timbalands, skirts or britches
N girls wear stitches congregation full of snitches
where niggas dig ditches cuz they cant cop wat-u-got
everythang is hot and its not the red dot
dis church is on mission,separate, and cause tension
no light is emitted hateration is spitted
and if you really got skillz then you're not premitted
i couldnt believe it it was like a bad dream
the way they came together just to hate and scheme
and believe it or not this site got some members
so just remember when your battles are judged...................... :nono: :laugh:

Milk 04-02-04 11:34 AM

AIGHT...

Here it is... I can tell you proabley are alittle new to the game, but you show great signs of potential. Your flow in this piece was on point, and you made sense, (which, lol, is always good)

Some things I would do... Is try to elevate your vocabulary and post some more shit that is longer, so we can see what you have to offer... IT WAS GOOD, but just keep elevating, and you can talk to me if you need any help on anything, i'm here... but a good start, keep elevating and doing you...

PLEASE... return the favor and peep the Hall Of Fame Collaboration in the open mic, thanks mayne... peace


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