C_R_E_A_M Vs CounTREE JAY
 

8 Barz
first to 5 votes wins
3-0 KO
u spit first
dead line is tonite at 1:00am

aight
 

Fam's sig says death is not a choice, it just happens,/
That's the future for you if continue rappin'/
It proably hit's home when you pick up a pen,/
Cause Like ya avatar, all your ex-girls was X-men./
Is that why you madd cause I wouldn't give you my digits./
U ain't never won the lottery, now you think you gonna hit it?/
Your flows couldn't be hott, if U took some paper and penned it./
Cause you spit in incoherent outbursts, like a rappin' skitsofrenic./

Aight, do you fam.

thats only 4 barz playa...but uh

h0w u claim ta be da greatest when ya havent yet beat-cream//
u winin this battle? like "fabolous" its only ya "street dream"//---1

dawg i g0t ratchets and tools ta blast-quick//
u'd think "gymnastics" how shells have u doin back-flips//---2

u shouldve came tough,but i see u just beginin//
like genisis this the "beginin" of "armagaden" for ya "endin"//---3

its like "holy scriptures" when im spitn,im typen da "truth"//
juzt think,if i did "audios" bet my flow sounds betta den you//---4

*note:ya 8 lines equal to 4 barz...so i just gave u for barz of mine instead of 8 ta be fair for now.

upin this

upin for sum fuckin votes

both of ya had sum good punches and vocab although cream got the vocab nod i gave the punches to Jay and u both had good structure and flow so i think it came down to who's verse made me drool more
and id have to say cuz of this line
It proably hit's home when you pick up a pen,/
Cause Like ya avatar, all your ex-girls was X-men./

my vote = CounTREE Jay
no hard feelinz

iight fam thankz for voten

1-0 Jay

LMAO.. CounTREE Jay took dis 1
dat shyt was funny.. he was clownin on dat other nigga
n tha other niggaz shyt dident really rhyme on parts..

Lolol ok...thankz for voten

2-0 Jay

vote for cj it waz close on the frist 2 barz but cream melted under heat cause u feal off bad cj kept hiz punchz flowin nice both had good structure though

these votes will be deleted becuz yall muhfuckaz aint voten correctly....ya not explainin enuff like the rules say...errr duh lol

dont cry cause u gettin beat step ya game up if it waz reversed u would be thinkin u waz the shit u got beat quit cryin

C_R_E_A_M won because counTREE used the word X-men.
easy victory.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Yall ni99az shytty lol str8 up...fuck ya unexplained votes....and ghost354....lol sdfu boi. and guyver4mk...explain ya vote muhfucka

sorry man. Jus a bit of pay back for ya boy.
Thats as much explination as he gave me so. U won this hands down.