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GB Killa 04-02-04 06:01 PM

GBKilla VS Brain "S"
 
post the rules and ill spit 1st..............................

brainsurgeon 04-02-04 06:10 PM

10 bars
No flipping, feeding, countering, recycling, biting, bitching, swaying
No whack, unexpected, d/r, hate or crew votes
Voting is by:

EITHER

1. Opener
Punches
Personals
Multi's
Flow
Creativity
Originality
Meta's
Vocab
Wordplay
Complexity
Aggression
Closer

AND/OR

2. line by line breakdown followed by a final vote

You drop first.

GB Killa 04-02-04 06:47 PM

what up DOC,
I'm a spit 10 bars, but dont you dare it/
some body give this fucking brainsurgeon a carrit/
my flow is real ur is plane synthetic/
and dont u forget it/
in other words dog ur fucking styles pathetic/
ur like Mr. Smith and im fuckin Neo/
I know ur gana lose, just call me miss Cleo/
casuse im a ferakin psycik/
jump up and give u a fuckin bruce lee side kick/
ill go now so u can spit/ but the only brains u workin on is my DICK.

GB Killa 04-02-04 07:34 PM

are u going to fucking ssspppit tttaddday junya. any time now.

brainsurgeon 04-03-04 02:13 PM

sorry dude......I think I'd suck to beat you so call this my verse:

I'm whack as fuck...can't land a punch...
b's like fucking pussy He can't stand a brawl
^can't even rhyme two sentences
and this line was included for eloquence
winning isn't everything so i'ma tell you how to spit
get creativity plus flow & you can be proud and sick
look at your verse you used a cleo line & matrix punch
that's played and if i bothered you'd be greatly crunched
if i had bothered I'd have bombed GB more Hitler did
moved my fists and electrocute killa like a pulled a lever quick
i'm the thunder God & yes you blundered son
It seems for you showing skill is cumbersome
This whack bar is better than you whole verse
You're so fucking DIM, You couldn't "kill a cat" if you were a slow vet

brainsurgeon 04-13-04 05:26 PM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^upping^^^^^^

GKillaz05 04-13-04 05:42 PM

Brain - hmm... I guess beings you didnt have to try that was a good spit, but you shoulda tried ne wayz.. but s'all good, you still threw some good punches and it flowed pretty good.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - I'm whack as fuck...can't land a punch...
b's like fucking pussy He can't stand a brawl
^can't even rhyme two sentences
and this line was included for eloquence (hmmm.....)

GB Killa - man that was the best shit I seen from you yet, dont meen it was good, just sayin your improving. you ned to increase your lines and throw more punches and multi's.

Best Line - what up DOC,
I'm a spit 10 bars, but dont you dare it/
some body give this fucking brainsurgeon a carrit/ (nice opener)

Worst Line - casuse im a ferakin psycik/
jump up and give u a fuckin bruce lee side kick/
ill go now so u can spit/ but the only brains u workin on is my DICK. (horible end, didnt even understand it)

OVERALL - I gotta give this whack battle too BRAIN. Just because he knew what he was doin, and didnt try but still threw punches and flowed pretty good. GB Killa just work on your flow man, and punches and you will keep gettin better.

Vote - BRAIN

RETURN THE FAV PEEPS, battle wit me and Baller. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119115

GKillaz05 04-13-04 05:43 PM

there aint even a poll this battle is so whack, lmao.. lol

brainsurgeon 04-13-04 05:47 PM

lol


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