X-CLUSIVE V. ExampleKid
 

Rules:
1 bar (2 lines) Min.
5 bars (10 lines) Max.
Vote count of 3-0 = KO
Vote count of 5-0 = LKO
First to 5 votes = Win
No dr, hate, beef, crew, ect... votes
No feedin', bitin', recyclin', ect...
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GOOD LUCK 'N HAVE FUN...





p'Z

Checkin' in, good luck homie!



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p'Z

Aiite check it homie it's over for you family . .


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I write with blood ink . . when I stab you with the pen . .
I'm the best . . watch me beat him senseless . . just to make an Example out this Kid . .
It's over with your voice . . when I rip out ya' neck . .
He a nobody . . I gave him life . . 'cause you couldn't say his name . . without the X . .
You never faced a vet . . you came to this site . . now ya' new . .
No one should ever follow in your footsteps . . 'cause your just an Example on how to lose . .
He a joke . . so I'm foldin' clowns real swiftly . .
You ain't big . . risin' to the occasion . . only when you type your name while holdin' down the shift key . .
I ain't a Comedian . . but I make jokes that get laughed at . .
He an easy task . . watch me get rid of Examples like students who don't take notes in their Math class . .

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Aiite good luck homie . .



p'Z

Is this nigga ever gon' drop man . . ?




p'Z

Uppin' this som'bitch back to the top . . !!!!!!!!!



p'Z

i feel you man he ain't droped on mine either. y'all heard

i am like jesus, the best when it comes to the mic
words so hard, it makes a pacifist ready to fight
but if you buck at the kid, your bound to get knocked back
and u try to regroup but i am consistant with the attack
and yall talkin shyte wonderin y i reply so late
i am in the streets on the grind, tryin to get in the game
ya'll some online rappers, i live in your lines
you rap my daily shcedule, when talkin bout nines
i am the best on the street at the age of fifteen
moneys runnin low, i am bout to polish the revolver
six bullets in yo body, now i am juvenile felon
feds got me on the run, now i am a well past killin
x clu never spoke to u, but u called me out
u in a pact wit aka to destroy me rep
nigga i done beat aka and now your next
i dont like faggots, i stay away from wankstas
the crowd bout to give me all their votes
u a bitch nigga that never agains deserves a post

yo i give this one to example kid that nigga got sickwitit and his structure was locked yo and x clu u was iight but he had more personals

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LMMMFAO @ THAT VOTE . . DA FUK OUTTA HERE !!






pz

Uppin' this bitch up to the top !!!!!!!



pz

ok this was a weak battle...nuthin ta have me sitten on da edge of my seat nah mean.
But honestly i think the boi X-CLU took this.Cuz basickally the utha guy didnt know what he was doin.Shyt was garbage.X ur shyt was basick and garbage also...yall both need to elevate and or get foreal nah mean.i didnt see no punches,multis,vocab or creativity.but yall both had good structure.

v/X-CLU

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^^honest vote on this

Really weak battle.Both of u need to add a little creativity in it.Flow would have to be example kid.But punches............
"i dont like faggots, i stay away from wankstas"
^Not only is that played out,you did not rhyme it.Next or votes don't rhyme wit wanksta,so what the hell.The rest of ur lines were pretty much as whack as that.

Vote-X-clusive

Agree with the /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ overall this was an alright battle, kid, had good flow, but lacked punches, I think ya got side tracked its a battle your suppose to becomming at him it sounded like you were freestyle'n a verse or somthing. X, after reading your verse first I thought you might be in trouble, not that it was bad, but I'm sure you can come more correct. Nice punches, just need better flow, and multi's

vote X

these niggas tryin to come at the kid wit this bull shyte naw it aint even goin down like that


the kids flow so sick, i got niggas in comspiracy tryin to get me
xclusive cant rap for a vote, so hes buys his votes
'u vote 4 me ill vote 4 u'
fuck that shyte ill empty a clip on you 2
yall some white boys that spend yo whole day on rap battles
like mtv's wanna b's, i wanna b my rap idle
but u can wear the clothes and u can talk the talk
but in the end its the wanna b's bodys surrounded by chalk
and in the end its yall niggas, dead in burbs
and i am goin to jail for murder, 4 killin u nerds
so xclusive keep makein deals, so chumps can vote for your shyte
and u provin my case, u statin to raps are shyte
and wut the fucks wrong wit the people that voted for him
look at his verse, it speakes for its self
but all i am hearin is shyte, it really speaks for itself
its ex example got yall niggas on yo knees, screamin 4 help