1st Spit
 

1st open mic....


Mc_Doom ya'll gotta get off those mushrooms dawg...
you got cum round ya mouth bitch and that shit aint egg nog...

you wont see me in the day i only come out at night...
ill fasten you up like a zipper and ya'll still wouldnt be tight...
jump form trees,gash yo knees and fuck you up till you feel pissed...
shit you cant stop me nor can your number 1 exorcist...
i dont mean to come across all dark,crazy and mad...
but when you saw your mom wiv a man doin summat ghostly and bad...
just to clarify.......... it wasnt yo dad...
i dont got a car or got any gunz shit...
i fly with wings...got claws and shoot bats out my dick...
psyco maniac intelligence level low...mind span of a newt...
im losin it maybe because when i pop a bat its also a brain cell i shoot...
fred hit me with a club now i think im barney rubble...
shit im dumb but i still know that ya'll nuffin but a spunk bubble...
ill find out details about ya life so i can diss you no sweat...
when i find it ill sell it all yo enemies on the black market...
ill pick you apart until you break down in tears and shatter like glass...
next time you see me feel me instead of just shittin ya pants ...
you scared dawg please theres no need i got better things to do....
il smoke a bag of my weed before i even bother dissin you...ya'll aint worth it
i can change from a joke to serious...shit its only my first open mic...
and i got ya'll bleedin like you on ya period...haha fuckin dykes...


holla back with sum feedback

CRHYME SINDICATE :shoot:

lookin 4 sum feedback

need sum feedback..................

good shit. keep it up.

that shit was hot homie keep that shit up babe........

one love.....

aight fanx 4 feedback

Yo Dawg Im Guna Be Honest Coz I ActuallY Read Dis Peace The Other Guys Above Me Didnt....You Can Tell They DidNt Read It Coz There Repiles Were So Damm Short And There Replie Was A total Lie...

This Peace Was Ok For A Newb..but It Was Wack In Most Departents.....Your First Line Was A Tipiacal Newb Line Eg: Refering To Drugs.....Dats Wat Newbs Always Spit Bout Drugs and Guns.....The Rest Was All Simple Rhyme Scheeme......Ur Vocab Was basic and Structure Was Wack Coz The Lines draged to Much...But For A newb This Was a Good Start...Overall....6/10
Godd Effort keep ASt it dawg..Pz out :D