young duke vs. service
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

Duke checkin in

Duke Duke Duke

yea, Yung is out to out ya crew, never know what I'm about to do,
Doctors pullin slugs out of you, shots critical, now you cant count to two,
Dare me to reach, then I'll be ready to squeeze,
treat you like a chick on ya period, get ready to bleed,
It's Yung Duke and I'm the comin of age,
I'll do yo like John Wilkes Booth, did Abe,
cause You the type of bitch that when yu get around strange men,
you like redd wit ya chain, like I'ma just tuck mine in,
I aint pull out my best in this battle, ya pussy ass aint even worth it,
I couldnt say ya pussy liped ass, cause we know you give lip "service,"
You say you better than the kid, I say Service you suck,
I got crooked cops that'll send you to jail and let Damian type niggaz serve you up...
~Yung Duke~

Gangsta?!? Net Gee?... This kids sparking some weapons
You were in the crew but your wack how'd you get let in
who you testin? SeRvIcE'll bruise this pussy's vaginals
wont win a title! look at the final four dukes known to lose in finals
Servin you in minutes, may turn out to be the main course
cause your only in the game when its ea sports
see why they call you young, your t shirts and skills come up short
run the court, I'm not even intending to pass! OkaY?
2 man in the runnings only time getting second isnt OkaY
Whole packed action! you in a reclined state
Got you out of the count like dracula on blind date
feeble little pussy bitch, Dont you know I floor geeks
I would finish you here but your verse did it for me


KEY

YO I'll admit ya shit was hot but i heard that ea sports line somewhere. but is somethin that could easily be made up by anyone.

I gotta give this one to Service.......... That was some HOT SHIT!!! Young came alright but you got smoked...... Don't give up hope cause your verse wasn't that bad, it's just that service had one line that did it for me..........

who you testin? SeRvIcE'll bruise this pussy's vaginals
wont win a title! look at the final four dukes known to lose in finals

^^ That was HOT!!!

Vote: Service

I knew that line was gonna kill me

^^^ I like your sig though................lol

breakdown for young duke:

flow:solid threw the whole peice no off spots good job 7/10

volcab:basic kinda of average but alright 6/10

punches:nothing really some vague disses but nothing that made me think you were really hurting him best line,"treat you like a chick on ya period, get ready to bleed," kinda played but 6/10

overall:19/30 alright verse

breakdown for service:

flow:a little broken up but it worked i guess 7/10

volcab:average no different from your oppenent 6/10

punches:you threw more i think then duke and you did try to get personal but it still was mainly played topics your best line,"cause your only in the game when its ea sports" 7/10

overall:20/30

vote--pretty close battle and i thank you two for showing up this week was horrible for no shows but my vote goes to service

2-0 service wins