DON.D Vs. Archetype
 

Rules:
1 bar (2 lines) Min.
5 bars (10 lines) Max.
Vote count of 3-0 = KO
Vote count of 5-0 = LKO
First to 5 votes = Win
No dr, hate, beef, crew, ect... votes
No feedin', bitin', recyclin', ect...
Check Ins due ASAP
Verses due within' 24 hours




Good Luck...

Aiite.. Checkin' In Fam Lay...


Check Up..



Good Luck...



SoLo Whun...

yo DON D SCRATCH OUT OUR BATTLE...CAUSE U ALREADY BATTLING I DONT WANNA GIVE U MORE THAN U CAN HANDLE...BUT I'LL HIT THIS UP AFTER YALL BOTH HAVE SPAT....DON D WE CAN BATTLE ANOTHER TIME...AINT GOT TIME RIGHT NOW...HOLLA BACK

enforcer
 

look dogg; i got ah right hook that ah drop nigga, i got heat that ah pop ah nigga , how dare u come against me;knock u clean out yo socks nigga,u aint heard tha don tha mob figure,fully macks and chrome trigga`s,gun yo ass down like bled-so u little ho-mo,and if this aint enough i got some mo,as u can see im dead serious ,i stops yo flow,you`s ah joke wit no hope; you sniff but yo girl she gone blow,i buss nigga`s like u 4 fun plus u nigga`s is bumms,i survive all 5shots. i carry a clock but i aint pac buss back till they all drop! kill tha poision before it spreads, pop my clock 2 shots to tha head,another wack mc is dead,spitin hot raps at cha somethin like ah dogg catcha,wit these heat you cant play bat catcha, hold up nigga im back at cha,no rapper just actor ;run up on ya punk ass sqeezin tha bird,like beefim i aint sayin ah word

my bad homie... ain't get to drop today... im at my boy X's crib chillin'... so i'll just drop asap... quick key'd verse cuh'z i gotta deal with lk as well...



SoLo...


Droppin' In A Minute...

Aiite..

Lets Get Semi-Serious...


Talkin' Too Much Shit When Ya Test Brings Nothin'
Easy Win.. Cuh'z I'mma Get Rid Of Double D Like A Breast Reduction. !!! (Don.D)
Borin' Ass Nigga... *Yawns*... Geez Damn Clown
Skills Are Below Par... With Glow On Ya Name Be The Only Time Don. D Stands Out. !!! (Self Explanatory)
Peeped Ya Verses.. Talk Of Your Better Then Me ?? Thats Alot of Laughter Drawn
Seems Like D Runnin From The Beam Cuh'z I Put The Dot After Don. !!!! (Don.)


Any Questions Or Don't Get A Line.. BLAH.. Don't Vote...



SoLo Whun...

BLAH.. come on guys.. fuckin' vote...



UPPPIN'...



SoLo Whun...

Archetype was ill' .. good battle you took this battle in catagory's. flowed better, better punches and multi's. Don. D you need some better structure and step up on the punches.

Vote - Arch

hit this up peeps I only need one more vote. http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...03&page=4&pp=15

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe