RAP GAME A Must Peep.......Please Reply)
 

Doin somethin out of the norm *gasp* I'm bein original/
Such real talk comin from a young individual/
So take this time to absorb my knowledge and let it seap in/
You'll be callin be Infusium, the leave in you'll believe in/
See I could easily resort to dumbing down the game/
Following the formula fist full of dollars and no brains/
I'm moved by challenges in cased you haven't noticed before/
So a difficult task like this would be too hard to ignore/
I see now some artist music is gettin sleazy/
Musical gangstas with band aid's "I'm a thug but I still burise easily"/
There's proof that the gangsta walk is failing in this world/
We supposed to beg for mercy but you wanna get to know a girl/
And as the world rotates and the casualties grow/
Only a handful of people agree that hip -hop is at a all-time low/
Now being gifted with true talent is looked upon as twisted/
And being corny and overated is looked upon as gifted/
I can already hear it now "who are you to judge whats real"?/
But this is my opinion what wrong with sayin what I feel?/
90% of those who rap are easily motivated by pay/
The other 10% know there pimp juice is watered-down kool-aid/
This profession is sacred, it resembles a lost treasure/
And once found it shouldn't be lown for a "few hours of pleasure"/
It seems your living you longevity out as a liar/
Thinking you raps of crap could pass for bars of fire/
Those who profess to be innovative and creative/
Only succumb to be dumbfounded and sedative/
You complainin cuz my intentions arent to move your feet/
But I'd rather touch the masses than have you dance over a beat/

yeah that was pretty good. keep it up.