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Tenken vs GB killa
aight heres the rules
house rules basically no d/r crew votes blind spit in 15 min after check in 10-15 lines |
yo killa check in man...i dont have all day.......
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ok lets go................................................ .............
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aight checkin in..................................
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kid you only think you're big, it's hot gas you cyphon//
but your tanks on "E" i swollow you whole like a python// you fuckin rat, you get capped with your own raps// you be beggin CP for help when your backbone snaps// wack azz cat speakin on all his guns// you ain't developed yet just like a small kids nuts// they aint hung, but you will be by your fuckin feet// let the blood rush to your head untill your eyeballs leak// your punches lack somethin, like trees without leaves// you're simply out of season, not even to mention my league// go back to the minors, come back when you gotten hotter// even then i dont guarantee you be near me, ill be walkin on water// i kick you in ya clit just for havin a pussy and tryin to diss me/// have you screamin "I'm not a girl" onstage singin next to britany// |
beat u , its oh so simple/
grabe u by ur head and pop u like a pimple/ my lifes real fucked up , i wouldn't excpect u to know/ got people turning their backs on me like johny deep in blow/ well what do u know im battlin another schmuck/ suck, fuck, luck, duck/ those all rhyme, dont htey puck/ im done im going home yo/ u can come over later and suck my dick homo/ |
yo can we get some votes on this shit...we newbs need some winz too ya know
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a vote is a vote a boat is a boat a moat is a moat//////// I want a 0-10 record
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I know how it feels to put a verse and no one votes. Anyway...
Tenken - your structure was good and you had better wordplay and better punches though they weren't too strong. Gb- you show no effort at all in this maybe your jsut a bit lazy in battles. Overall i vote for Tenken http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118298 |
tenken u had nice structure flowed good nice wordplay some punchz an personalz none really hit that hard either though
gb u had ok structure started off better but fell off way to much at the end had more multiz and good punchz at first but waznt consistent vote/tenken hit up these ghost vs threatz ghost vs gkillaz 1 |
yo, imma do this ezs style aight.
v/teflon (opponent spit 8 lines) hit this up http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118285 lol |
my vote is for tenk, not much to explain .. G were you even tryin?.. good flow tenk and nice punches.. GB if your serious about this go read how to flow and make punches bud.
hit these up please: http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...03&page=3&pp=15 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118165 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312 |
why do people come and look but dont vote while there here....its 50 views and 11 replies...whats the reason?
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ok breakdown
opener - T flow - T punches - T wordplay - T closer - T Enjoyment - T Ok ur first 2 lines beat him.....G u need to either elevate ALOT or stop fuckin round........easy win for Tenken....T u forgot to poll ur vote in my battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118305 |
teken u won by about 10000000000000000000000 miles that was not a battle
more like a pretty verse ya wrote, i give ur verse about 6/10 nice punches i like that shit bg killa tell me is this ur 1st battle, cuz now we all now that ya life is shit blah blah blah u life seems to be so shit man i think u must be a terd just kiddin but seriously go home and try and define this rap sites name then come back and ill battle you 0/10 vote goes for Teken |
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