diablo-viceVSWildfire
 

Diablo-Vice vs Wildfire

ok you up first wildfire this battle is not an insult contest but a beggining to both our records on RB so make the shit happen

yo can yall check this battle out...i'll return the favor when u both need a battle its called

MARVOLOUS VS QUICKPUNCH state why u voted etc etc..thanks man..i'll hit this up after uve both spat

first battle, lookin for feedback only

I take one look at diablo and i can tell he's a homo/
his rhymes couldn't be "solid" there more "broke" than a hobo/
and if my rhymes don't getcha than i'll kill you with structure/
fuck just your spleen it's your brain that I'll rupture/(ruptured spleen)
and if even that fails me I'll "blind" you with imagery/
you can't run "next to me" cause you lack the mental "symmetry"/
you better take notes cause my rhymes are on point/
face it man you couldn't smoke me if i was a joint/
cause my "flow" is "sicker" than over"flowin" toil-etes/
this battle is like a movie, i'm gonna spoil it/
cause after peeps read what i write theres no question about it/
you couldn't get "heard" in a silent room if you "shouted"/
so for right now I'm gon stop and give you a chance/
remember, don't come to the show if you don't know how ta dance/

damn fire that was some hott shit for a newb for real....i'll vote on this after vice drops...for now tho if u have more than 10 post can both yall check this battle out and vote on it and state why u voted

quickpunch vs marvolous

i voted...i gave you the vote...looks like you needed it too..because of me it's 2-1 in your favor...btw..thanks

I give some respect to the gangsta wildfire
but just so he knows im a killa for hire
cause the name Diablo-Vice
take your chances roll the dice
all u other MCs ill murder one, two, thrice
hey wildfire your not a gangsta your a pranksta
so for handing me this battle i geuss i have to thank ya
i hit the murder scene
bringing matches and gasoline
no matter how the epic ends
but i still snap your splene
so remember me diablo vice
you'lle see me in in your dreams
in a cold ass sweat you'lle wake up and scream
"MOMMY!" whys Dablo-Vice so mean

good battle

This battle was pretty good, better than I expected.

Wildfire came wit some fire but no personals. You won't win battles wit no personals. Wordplay was kinda basic and nothin really stood out.
Fav Line:
and if even that fails me I'll "blind" you with imagery/
you can't run "next to me" cause you lack the mental "symmetry"/

Diablo-vice had a slow start and never really had anything that stood out either. Everything here was basic but it had a nice flow. Both of you guys need to learn what a personal is. Say somethin about his name or where he's from, shit you can't say to just anyone.
Fav Line:
so remember me diablo vice
you'lle see me in in your dreams
in a cold ass sweat you'lle wake up and scream
"MOMMY!" whys Dablo-Vice so mean

My vote in this one has to go to Wildfire.

my vote goes to wildfire. his verse was a little rough but overall better. diablo, you came cool, but you lost points on originality for the lines you used from (the realist)chronic 2000. it was only two lines, but still, it was two lines. try a little harder to come original playboy. stay up fellas.

s.v. the kingpin

Structure- Wildfire
Personals- Neither
Multis- neither
vocab- Wildfire
punches- Wildfire

Wildfire was pretty good, just work on the personals definately, and multis are usually a good thing to have, especially if it's close. Otha nigga, diablo, your shit was just "off-beat" I guess if there is such a thing in text, at times. Just workon that a lil' more and personals and everything else.

Vote: Wildfire

uppin for votes..come on people...2 more votes..thats all i need...lets close this and get it off the board..make room for everybody else...peace

yo wildfire that was some hot shit. Diablo that was pretty hot to but i give it to wildfire he just had those hot punchlines.

my vote
 

Alright.

Wildfire- I liked your flow, most of your stuff stuck out and was hard hitting. You had good punches and some ok personly's. I liked your originality also, you hit the mark well. Work on some better Multi's but your wordplay is great.

Vice- You started out shaky, but your flow became more solid. Try to start of hard, and then from there hit him with some Peronly's or multi's. Your multi's were ok, but Wildfire just had the better flow overall.

Vote: Wildfire

Return the favor please:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118919