good-bye
 

3 seconds to say i love you
3 hours to explain
how you can love me
but cause me all this pain
you leave my heart with grieve
and you cause me to cry
so i'll give you a kiss
and tell you good-bye
my heart still wants you here
but my mind is saying ''no''
so i'll find another place
and that'z where im gonna go
i will love u forever
and i hope we can still be friends
but this is how it happens
and this is how it ends

Nice Drop
The emotion in this piece was pretty deep, We all can relate to this....well most of us
Your Structure was pretty basic, nothin wrong with it
Vocab was pretty simple, but it seemed like your were venting so vocab doesn't matter in this kind of piece.
Very nice drop, keep it up,

Please check out "Pure Emotion"

Peace

hahahahahahahahaha
 

iiqht...lmfao 1st off....u a damn lie......dis poem has been on firehotquotes.com for like 2 years......smh @ poem stealers hOffuh :laugh2:

^LMFAO I've Seen It Up On Firehotquotes.com Too' ...!! For Real KKBug WTF? .. That Shit Was Weak Also' ... You Could Have Came Up With Better Shit Then That!!!! Ah Ha