first flow
 

from adolescent to the present, things remain the same -
this whole world seems hesitant, stuck in it ways and wont change-
hiding its discrepancies with cosmetic smiles, all the while spittin venom thats vile-
with hostile environments without disarmament, only a matter of time before blood flood the cement-
and its funny how we're late for important engagements, and early for things that dont involve payment-
its a shame aint it, the way that we carry ourself, we'll sell our souls to the devil just to gain wealth-
drop out of school wit hopes of being in the rap game, cuz if Kanye did it, then we can do the same-
some of our brain is as transparent as cellophane, can see rite thru us as if you was lookin in a window pane-


NOT DONE...............

...It was nice. Vocab was cool and the rest was on. But the flow was off at points.