Akademekz v.s. Shadows Edge
 

ok once you check in poste your battle
make it 10 lines or more
after we both subit our verse let the votes start
you go first

checking in... should i post my thing right now? it's ready.

Alright whatever, here it is:

Akademekz… funny name for a bitch who can’t spell
Ah well.. take this cat to school at the sound of the bell
That signify that this fight has begun
Though in reality even before it started this shit was done

Funny, just the other day this dude was hooked on phonix
Now he be in college, getting a degree in ebonics
Just so he can pretend he’s a real street thug
Too bad I come in and pull the fucking plug

Like a chess grandmaster, I know yo move before it’s made
Though really it’s cuz you never passed the second grade
Copping all your shit from whack rappers past
Step in the ring with me and that shit won’t last
Each night whacking off to tracks from fiddy,
Tomorrow this bitch gonna change his name to A. Diddy

Funny you should mention no shows in the bitch slapped thread... :cussing:

Hahaha..winning this battle is battle is only gonna take half of the work
The hard part is keeping the voters awake after reading half of ya verse
You think you a thug too bad son ..if only ya knew
That a womans vagina is less pussy than you
now tell me shadow that that wasn't orginal
But you never had pussy so you couldn't get it tho
now how you expect to win with that weak-verse
you text record is gonna be like mines right now but in re-verse
sorry kid but you chose to be in the wrong battle
how could you work the balls to beat me but you scared of your own shadow
I killed this kid this kid and i did it but didnt try
Thats why i posted my shit in quick reply
it was fun but fuck it your done
now i got 99 problems and this bitch aint one

Ok, I'll pretend that's not feeding even though you took a couple lines straight from my stuff.. the "original" line doesn't even fit but whatever..

vote people.

Uppin for votes, we done now.... ... ...

be real i didnt feed off of anything and the original does fit say out loud ull see its not basic rhyming . and i took no lines from your stuff it would be too obvious after i said if i feed i loose. but whatever

Ok yeah, I'm saying the line before it is overused.. but seriously no hard feelings man.. your verse was good. Vote people!

I'm Goin to Vote for Shadows edge because I liked his structure, and he had a consistant flow. Akademekz's verse was good, but there's over-confidence, then theres arrogance. You spen most ur time tellin everyone how you won man.

v/ Shadows Edge

wow, i thought this battle was dead.. alright people just 4 more, vote here and i'll vote on your shit.

^^^^ that was over confident, everyone has it in them
can some more people vote please and vote honestly and drop a link after you done so i can vote on your battles too.

umm nice battle...

STRUCTURE-i could read both of ya'll shit..so its tie
PUNCHLINES-didn't see alot but i saw a few from akademekz
WORDPLAY-akademekz
FLOW-shadow
PERSONALS-akademekz....he killed shadow with da personals..4real
ENJOYED-akademekz....umm its not hate edge but aka was gettin at u talkin about ya record and all dat nahmean so he won it with da personals

MY VOTE-AKADEMEKZ

vote: shadows edge, better continuous punches and jus better ones. other cat had a few filler lines and punches wasn't as good.

You think you a thug too bad son ..if only ya knew
That a womans vagina is less pussy than you
now tell me shadow that that wasn't orginal

he wont tell u that, but i will, that line is played and because u tried sayed sumin that dumb wich is completely wrong, since its not original, i had ta vote agianst u.
deacent everything else, both, decent punches and stuff
vote:shadow

yo get a finish vote on mine agianst puertoricanelly in return.......