Thug
 

everyone has a different meaning of the word thug
is it a person that does a drug
is there really one meaning to the word
everyone jus' speaks of what they heard
i don't understand
i'm confused
to not kno how this word is used
plz help me
wat u think
could u tell me 1 day of this week
how can 1 word be used so many ways
it makes me feel like i'm in a haze
or is it jus' cause i'm in a blaze

It was ok, it had a pretty good flow, just try to work on the vocabulary. Try to use some "bigger" words, but keep the flow though.

agreed. also you have some REALLY short lines. this ain't a damn limerick! Try using words that are more specific also.