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DeVaZtAtE MinDz

04-07-04 02:34 PM

Is This a Proper Haiku???

This is my struggle
The lyrics clash within me
I must release them

spitah

04-07-04 03:01 PM

Seems fine to me: 5,7, and 5 syllables in 3 units. You went 5,7,5 so I dont see a problem. Some people do go 5, 6, 5 sometimes though.

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